All Comments on 'My Story'

Wonderful story, great beginning. I hope you will continue with this story soon. It is a fantastic read.

a very nice opening chapter . . I'm looking forward to more :-)

love is never wrong when it is shared with someone who loves you in return

I loved your submission and do hope you develop it into a sibling love story, since I'm a real sucker for forever love. Please give us more chapters soon.

I'll give you 100 for not over exagerating but you hve to loosen up a little .

Love to see you back Jennagurl! look forward to reading more great bro/sis stories from you.

Great to have you writing again here, Jenna, and for sharing your own story. Can't wait for more.

good so far but you need to finish if you want a good rating we need to know if the parents find out if she gets pregnant and if they stay together so you need to write atleast one more chapter

When I was in my teens and my sister was 1 year and 8 months older I had fantasies of having sex with her. I sure wish she would have been as bold as the sister in this story. I had a picture of her that I took at the beach in her bathing suit that I'd look at and jack off. lol

it seems a dumb that he would go to her club when she was there if he wasn't going to watch her seems to me he would avoid the club except when she wasn't working keep it somewhat realistic please

DBRS

horny i can relate to your story my sister seduced me our mum catch us i had to leave my sister became very unhappy mum ask me to come back now we shere the same room mum is always spying

By a sexy young lady -- very nice. Hope you're still finding time to write out here!

But again you never continued nor finished it.

A great shame, because you are a good writer...........