by hewrite
Great story. I hope you continue to tell us the story of these characters. This is going to be a great redemption storyline.
Writing like this is why I still regularly sift through page after page of work that just doesn't hit the mark for me. Writing like this is why I love this site. Thank you for this masterpiece.
gratuitous
grə-ˈtü-ə-təs
ADJECTIVE
not called for by the circumstances : not necessary, appropriate, or justified : unwarranted