by Passing
It doesn't need a follow up. As it is it's tremendously arousing. The whole point of the story has been made without reducing it to tripe.
Three thumbs up.
you write really well... it flows easily... like a good film script which leaves a lot for the director, your story leaves a lot for the reader... it is erotic because it is all about imagination and desire, not polluted by tawdry details of reality ...
Please continue the story. It's only there first date, and I'm intrigued.
I'm already a little turned on. I really hope you continue this story. I would love to see the rest of the night played out.
Anticipation and imagination are often better than endless description.