by JasonClearwater
This is taking a very needed and very interesting turn. loved the story till now
I love this story and so, please, keep on writing and release a new part asap ;-)
I haven't enjoyed a story like this in a long time. I can't keep from laughing with each new line. It's crazy how Jaspar is getting the brunt of his actions returned back on him. Love his little mind comments he does. Please keep up this crazy story. What a great job.
I'm even more dense than Jasper. I felt a bit dubious about this series at the start but you did promise he would get his comeuppance and by God you didn't let me down. I did not see this coming and I'm dreading what's next! I have enjoyed the series but I loved every nasty, sexy, cringing and hilarious moment of this chapter.
Really enjoying the comedic bits in this dark story, literally laughing out loud. The characters' inner monologues are great! Love what's happening to Jasper. Keep up the fun read and thanks!
Excellent story. Am dying to see what happens next (and hoping that Jasper gets fucked, hard, by Carl soon)