All Comments on 'My Sweet Sister in Law Ch. 02'

this story was a complete piece of trash. Rape is not erotic

This is trash.The names are super weird,and the story makes no sense.

Please ignore the comments of previous 'Anonymous'. Obviously, he/she has come to the wrong site. I have to say that it is better than most others who write desi stories. However, I think you need to flesh out (no pun intended) the stories a lot more.

When there cumin they like it duh

Great stories ... keep writing.

First, you definitely need an editor to proofread and fix your work. Spelling, missing words, the wrong word, are just some of your grammar problems. Now, that said, I like the story, there is nothing wrong with the names, you did use a couple of words not in English that needed defining, but the story was good. Lots of sex, but some might say it's in the wrong category. I don't believe the sex acts between sisters is incest. It's a hot three some. Why have you waited so long to add chapters to it, ending it with a bang!! Pun intended. Good work. Keep writing, but EDITING!!!EDITING!!!EDITING!

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