All Comments on 'My Sweet Stephanie'

Sure wish I had a daughter. Perhaps my niece or granddaughter will want me to teach her someday.

Good story. Very hot. You leave the reader wanting more. Hope you write a follow-up.

Great story :)

Sloppy writing. Old story, different names. That was 3 minutes I'll never get back.

A boring story, no credibility.

Before writing about the hymen you need to find out where it is located; ask a girl if you know one.

Needs work, has potential.

I'm not saying we should drag your editor out front and string 'em up. yet. But in the sentence ""But daddy I only love you and you haven't been with anyone since mom. I had a dream a few years ago dream and mom told me you should be my 1st ever," she said."" would a comma after ago and removing the word dreams have shown your correct intention? I feel like a dick but there's that.