All Comments on 'My Teacher, My Stepmother'

Dumb

Quirky, and also ripe for development.

Absolute crap. Written by a 12 year old I reckon.

Nice and neat. I do wish you had developed it a bit more.

No, not written by a 12yo - written by a male, who wants to write like a woman. (Doesn't really get away with it, but not a complete disaster, either)

This needed a lot of build up and not rushed as it was. This story could have been a lot better if time was taken in a lot of key areas

Perhaps it could have been longer and more flesh in places but regardless I think its good. It reads well, and enjoyable. I like your style and look forward to more offerings. Please write some more!

So the dad's too stupid to realize his fucking around with drugs and alcohol plus the constant bimbo train is hurting his company? Him spying on his daughter thru her social media is also fucked up.

That is soooo sweet. It really belongs in Romance, if only Lit weren't so *@#$* heteronormative.