by FantasiesinSleep
I only have one daughter, but I there is nothing better than cumming deep inside her sweet cunt which fits and ripples so perfectly around my cock. Because she’s my daughter.
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It felt that the story went straight to sex without any build up or preamble. One moment normal family, the next they are having sex. Writing seems good but the story was lacking quite a bit.
Hope to see a sequel. Maybe Eva's first time with Dad's cock
COVID pandemic taboo pleasure. Such a hot story and look forward to reading the second part.
I rarely say this, but this story needs to be longer. I think my lead up, more interplay in the family before it turns sexual, would have been good. And the speed it moved was alittle too fast paced. There wasn't any tension or mystery. But I liked it, and hope it continues. As you've set up the story with the daughters being close but with separate likes, this has room to grow without having to change the outline very much.
Would like to have seen more age-separation between the daughters. Maybe one of them about 24.
A truly well written story!! This one definitely deserves five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️
1/5 not even, 0 star for me, there is no story here, no inhibition, just a quick wham bam thank you maam