by nycperv
Good premise.
Bad delivery on potential.
He fucks her. Boom. No foreplay. No buildup. To slow teasing. No slow undressing and admiring each other's boobs, pussy, cock and balls. No nothing.
Disappointing.
Two stars.
I gave you 5 stars just because I'm such a blowjob fan and that part did not disappoint. She also fit, close to perfect, what I would be looking for physically.
It has a really good premise, and there are parts that are very descriptive, but it gets choppy. The second half and the parts where he starts to get dominant definitely improve the story, but I would have liked to know his thought process behind taking that initiative. You don’t get a whole lot of what either character was thinking, and that hurts the story
Dr beulahthebrit; Maybe, I'm a bit dim, but surely the whole point of sucking a guy's cock is to get a nice mouthful of cum to swallow, if you don't like a warm, creamy mouthful, don't suck his cock in the first place. Personally, I find that giving a blow-job is one of the greatest forms of sex, certainly equal to eating pussy and being fucked in the arse.