All Comments on 'My Turn'

Good one, but needs a sequel

Interesting premise.

But sex moves along too fast.

Why no discussion about why he likes feet? Does he like her feet? Dis he ever fantasize about them? What did he imagine doing to them/having them do to him?

Would he like to touch them? Kiss them? Lick thm? Suck them?

What about the rest of her body?

Could have been a real winner. Four stars for potential.

It would be the hight of irony of the sister developed a cuck fetish.

Really unique writing style and kept me hooked.

Good story that kept getting better.

5/5

Your writing style gave just enough detail to paint a clear picture while letting my imagination run wild. Well done!

Great story