All Comments on 'My Twenty First Birthday'

by Janice1939

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Found it hard to read

Lots of grammar challenges; especially with possessive forms: lack of apostrophes for possessive nouns (mothers versus mother's) and "Mine boobs never grew..." versus "My boobs never grew..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Huh?

I could not follow this story.

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 5 years ago
Hard to follow..... yes!

English must be your second language! Still, I enjoyed reading your story and would gladly do my best to be your subservient cunt licker!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Grammatically challenged

English must be your 3rd. language. Grammatically challenged twaddle!

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