All Comments on 'My Twin Loves Ch. 02'

I'm very into this story, but I was shocked when ch.2 ended so abruptly. It doesn't feel like an enticing cliffhanger as much as filler that doesn't respect the readers time

I gave the story five stars. I'm not one of the grammar nazis here at Lit; with that said, I think you need to carefully proofread your story. I look forward to reading the following chapters, where I hope to see more background on all the characters developed.