by Callicious
i would have been making out with all of them and grabbing there ass and boobs
I would love to experience this
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Email me if you want to make this happen
By the way i dont check email that often
In many ways I am slightly conflicted about this story as there are huge elements I love about it a lot but small elements I don't like, like when Jimmy think "no satisfaction from embarrassing and humiliating them" but then a bit later is happy to emotionally manipulate Tricia into spreading her legs. I do really like the more shy moments he has though as I think that really works very well. Personally I would prefer it if Jimmy was still rather shy (though improving from the start) and it was his sister that was getting a bit of revenge on Jimmy's behalf knowing that he can't do it.
However despite what I have said here this is still a very good story, one that I am enjoying a lot. Thank you for writing it.
outstanding. As I had commented at 1st chapter, all the essentials. Story, pace, emotions and innocence of all. You have created an outstanding situation. Thank you'
Definitely keep up the great work. Love this series and agree with the other poster, love how you leave us hanging wanting more. Definitely can't wait for the next installment!
Probably one of the best concepts that I've read recently. Very well written, great attention to detail. And just when it gets really good, you leave the audience wanting more (in a good way l). Writing like this is why I started reading erofic stories to begin with and am writing my own ;-)
Such a cornucopia of needy females!! One realizes that his sister WILL eventually partake, but for now, and the next few chapters this is sweet and gentle revenge, at it's best!! Always nice to see the tormentors beg to be tormented!! LOL