All Comments on 'My Vacation with Mom Ch. 01'

by Van999

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
excellent

Excellent in every respect !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
my mom

the story is a duplicate of my life with my mom she too is fantastic in bed even tho she is plump and 51 yrs old so thanx for the story it was great

GeorgepatGeorgepatalmost 19 years ago
Loved it!!

I've never had the opportunity as these two did, but would have loved to.

You did a very good job with it.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story!!!

Great Story, Loved it Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
wow

wow...this story was great, nice plot line, it made it seem "innocent" while being so fucking hot the same time...loved it, keep it up babe

jpp87-5jpp87-5over 18 years ago
I loved it!

This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. You are a very good writer. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great story!

Hard to find stories this good. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
got me and my mum going

i fucked my mum so hard after reading this one and now er going on holidays

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Enthralling

A very well written story. Thanks for investing the amount of time it takes to write a story like this. I lost myself in its smooth depths. I look forward to reading your other works.

redlinejohn68redlinejohn68about 16 years ago
such a hot sub! Thanks

Van, hope this wasn't just a fantasy...Great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
"There was my mother's cunt, spread wide for me"

An excellent story, by a gifted writer. Motherfucking is the hottest new trend in sex, as the Irish and American commentators below attest. Many many mothers are now middle aged, or approaching it, divorced or widowed, or else still married to a hubby who can't do much for their cuntal needs. As a young male, the son of the family picks up on his mother's need. Shit, this is the very twat he's ALWAYS wanted to fuck and cream in, the best fucken twat in the whole fucken world, his own mother's! In this story the incestuous fuck urges of Tom and his mom are triggered by the example of a couple of newly weds. But nowadays many thousands of mothers and sons just fuck because it's a lot of fun for both when boy's stiff prick goes up his mother's twat and he unloads his balls up the same cunt he came out of. Really, why the fuck not?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Damn

That got me so hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well done staging

What a great set up to an "oops" moment.

Corey2JustifiedCorey2Justifiedover 10 years ago
eh...

Could have been better if Lisa didnt say,look sally'his cock is inside me now... Duh... Also it would be better if sally and roy were not in the story

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago

Hot story. I liked having the other couple there fucking alongside mom and son.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More fun followed!

We could hear Lisa and Roy leave as we lay on the bed together. I looked at mom's tits in her bikini top, her nipples poking out, and I could feel my cock getting hard again. Mom noticed the bulge in my swim suit and with a smile, she got off the bed and removed her bikini completely. Then she pulled off my trunks off, and got on top of me spreading her legs on either side. Mom guided my cock to her wet lips until it's head was against her pussy lips, then slowly dropped down until she was sitting on my cock. Roy and Lisa were having dinner when they heard screaming. "Oh god Tom, fuck me honey, harder, fuck me harder," my mother yelled! "Oh yes, oh yes baby, oh god, oh god, I'm cumming Tom, I'm cumming! She screamed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
BRAVISSIMO! LOVED THE STORY! [☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0/5.0 = 100% = A+)] A brilliantly conceived scenario! A masterfully crafted storry invluding the characters.

Van999 skillfully (slowly but surely) brings the 2 characters into a totally unexpected situation where the unimaginable becomes the order of the day.

My mother was in most of my daydreams and jack-off fantasies for many years.

She was a Rubenesque woman. I was a very observant son, i was a peeping Tom. I kept it all to myself, though.

bad1_bbad1_bover 3 years ago
Smoking hot

A delicious tale. Loved the intensity

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

Fan-fuckin-tastic. Loved how mom rolled with the ruse and went catatonic sexually. Great job, on to chap 2

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