All Comments on 'My Virgin Sister'

Firstly, this is a Very good story. One of the best in the Incest genre Imo. At least it excited me. If i am reading a story for the purpose of being sexually stimulated and it doesn't accomplish that, then i don't see the point. I have read other stories on LIT (at least one by this same author) that i would call beautiful, sexy and Hot because of the writing style. And Visual descriptors are important. I would like to have seen the author here spend just another sentence or 2 for describing when Lisa lost her virginity. Jmo. Obviously Everyone has their own idea of what erotica is Vs. having some aspects of Porn. I think the two are very closely related. Secondly, it is an Absolute joy to read a story (such as this one) that has Minimal typos, grammar errors, etc. To me, Nothing is more frustrating than trying to focus on reading and then having to stop, back up and try to "fill in the blank". This author has not written anything here in 4 years. I don't write but i often wonder Why an author misses an opportunity for additional chapters. This one had potential to add Dad to the mix though it is 15 years old. I hope this author continues to write. 5

When I first read this story s few years ago I thought it was just Fantastic. Now, after reading many many of the Literotica stories, I have promoted it to my BEST EVER stories list, as the very best bro-sis on Literotica. Jack's seduction of his twin sister via teaching her to suck his cock was absolutely classic, and then to seduce her into cmplete debauchery was without parallel. And to add to that, getting his sister to seduce their mother and then to help him completely do her too was simply incredible. Thanx for the best Read Ever!

Was a great story till you got the mom involved! Ruined!! The only addition thatd make it excitin would be Jack and the daddy double teaming them!! Like fuck thats hot!

It's a shame the author has no idea about female anatomy, particularly the location of the hymen. To write about a young virgin that gets finger banged by two different guys, on multiple occasions, that magically still has to worry about the pain of her first time when her hymen is finally broken? Hint: It's not where you seem to think it is.

Doesn't score very highly on believability, but very high marks for a gradual increasing of intensity, and really hot sex. Got a bit porny for my taste towards the end, but overall really cool stuff!

Freaking Awesome! Well written, from one seduction to another. And the experimentation they preform on each other.

Okay. I don't masterbate, watch porn or really anything. I honestly don't know how but, I stumbled upon these countless stories. Have read idk 10 or 20 now! Enjoy reading, IQ extremely above average & then some. Covid being what it is, I've sorta been stuck in the fucking house 14 months. Seen maybe 4 family members, then I did see 3 friends (seperate times) from approximately 12ft, both double masked!! Michigan is fucking Covid insane, at the present time April 2021. Well it's been insane last 5yrs & way longer. Douche bag Trump, Covid, Flint water, Detroit always, Capital under siege, governor almost kidnapped & countless more things!! MY POINT: congrats on this writing man!! Great story!! STORY ISSUES: to me was the mom shit. Personal issues & the brother & sister did great on their own!! NOW: to the writer, Hot story! I leaked or O'd just reading, nothing else. PEOPLE ISSUE: many write, the sister would be knocked up & the mom! If you can believe the organism's going off like fire works & many other things! Then you idiots should just assume, even a virgin can be & probably is, on the pill these days! Next, with medical & pregnancy issues these days, then after the mom gave birth to twins! She got her tubes tied, had a medical complication & can't have kids or is just infertile!! Fuck!! Next, ppl say the girl went from virgin to super horny or slut I guess, if you must call her that! Well, she said she was fingered a bunch & did everything, but sex. Hence, she wasn't new to much. Also, it's sorta how sluts are born. Was popular in high school & several girls were virgins & once popped, they had fucked around 7 to 20 guys in a month! 2 girls, way more! Have 2 stepdaughters. I listen to 1 of them & her friends. At times, like 8 to 15 spend the wknd. They talk about sex a ton!! Have contest on who can blow, fuck or do other things to guys & keep track. Had a place for teens down the street, because many teens were having sex inside the building, outside the building, in the woods, in the parking lot, or leaving from there to have sex parties. Then drugs, alcohol & much more helped close it, but that was after 8yr. Kids, teen & ppl in their 20's suck, fuck, drink, do drugs & way more!! Sorry to babble. Dude 5 stars & hope you keep writing!! Ya have skills!! This story, brother showing up at 18yr old sister's lingerie party with her 4 friends, sister in love & brother in or definitely really gets in love "sister write "IMU" in sand, & 1 other story, are the top 3 & hot!! OHHH thank you!! Most story's end or are shitty!! You ended with brother & sister sharing an apartment & in my head living together after school!!! Love it!!! They seriously were in love, stayed in love & lived happily ever after!! Thank you, you rock, KEEP WRITING!!!

Why did you gave to bring the mom into it without putting that in the description.

The best story I’ve read

Incredible

I enjoyed the story until the scene in their mother's bedroom. Just wasn't for me for some reason so I stopped reading it then rated the story as a three star. I would have rated much higher if it hadn't been for seducing their mother as they did.

Hottest bit was when he enters his sis for the first time, and describes her sexy little pussy as "massaging" his cock "with a thousand needles". My dick gonna be forever envious of this scenario...

Great story,I only wished you carried on with it. I feel there’s a lot more to this story. Still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved this story. Interesting, as well as sexy. Thank you!!

Thank you. This story is well crafted, fast paced, high interest, and hot! Bring us another.

I loved it, erotic, well paced. Just established a vigorous pace then kept on going and going. Well done!

Wish my wife could show at least a tiny bit of Interest in sex. Guess we've been married too long. This story had my dick hard to the end. Don't you love it when some readers comments indicate that fantasy isn't real. I'm sure in this wild world, a three-way like this has happened. I once watched a video made in Russia where a youngish man introduced his sister and mother and then proceeded to fuck them both. It was realistic but I could tell neither of the women were much into it. Probably did it for the money. Their home was a novel.

I marked this as a favourite. First time ever..

A good horny tale, producing several boners in the reader.

I skipped from page 3 to page 9. For me a good story must have some belevability. This one didn't.

Just read this story from your collection. Excellent job. You have become one of my favourites! Hope your other stories come close to this. Thanks

I loved it all, but the harness part didn't seem like it belonged.

I really enjoyed your story. It was well written and very hot, but it had one very obvious flaw. While 'keeping it in the family' usually does not cause STD's, it very often results in unwanted pregnancies. You did not mention any one of the participants using any form of birth control.

Excelente

Awesome story! Couldn't stop reading it. Kept me with a perpetual hard on the entire time!

Wonderful.

make babies7

It's awesome man.. 5 stars from me

My brother and I were home alone a lot, and he was my very first fuck. Painful at first but pleasurable at the same time became he has a huge thick cut cock. Always pulled out and spurted on me. So erotic!

Amazing story thank you!

An amazing story!!!

Sounds Great never had a Mother & Daughter. Have had my wife & her Sister it was great would have been better if they eater each other 's pussy!!!!!

Damn great

Gave you 5 stars because 10 wasn’t available.

Wow. This is a incredible story. Please make a x film from this story

I KNOW HOW TO PLAY MONKEY IN THE MIDDLE BITCH YOU CANT FUCKING EXPLAIN THINGS TO ME 1V1 ME NOOB

Absolutely amazing;

Can't get any better.. Would like to know about the movies they made/make

Wow..just amazing ..thousand starts for this one

Wow that was so hot, I couldn’t stop reading it had to read every chapter. Got hotter as it went a long. Again I say wow.

This was so fucking brilliant made me cum several times reading it.

I can't believe how well written this story is. Very captivating and erotic from start to finish. A very tailored and well structures story telling. Well done!

What a calling shame you didn’t continue on with sequels. There so much more to this story.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you

What a fuck feast!

I enjoyed this story immensely but I find the constant use of the present tense for things that happened in the past annoying. I know that, if used sparingly, it can add immediacy and pace to the action. But it shouldn't be used throughout the story as it can confuse the timeline and just irritates literate readers.

Apart from this though I congratulate you on a well written and very sexy story. I hope to read more about Jack and Lisa in the future.

This was one of the most well-written tales I’ve read in a long time. Well done!

This story really got my juices going … until Mom gets in on the action. Jack and Lisa had lots more adventures to be experienced without the need to bring someone (Mom) in to the action. I suspect the author got tired of this story or lazy and wanted to end it and move on. Too bad heshe hasn't posted in a few years … ah well, maybe Someone will pick up where the kids left off.

I think about the only thing not covered in this story was golden showers. Just about everything else goes, but I loved it. If you didn't get hard reading this story than maybe you should check your own pulse because you must be dead. Kind of long but worth the time spent reading it. Thanks for posting.

I have been coming back to this story almost daily for over a decade.

It has been 14 years and I cannot get ENOUGH of Jack and Lisa!!! This is not an epic fail, don't listen to the haters LOL!!! please give us a part 2, i have much more cum where that came from.

Made me hard as fuck! makes me wish i was in this story!!! BTW Rated five stars!!!!!!

I agree that the sibling part was delicious, but the story got really stretched when Mom got involved.

You lost all credibility when you put the hymen halfway in her pussy. The hymen is at the entrance and would’ve most likely been broken the minute anything was shoved into her - fingers, tongue, cock - whatever.

Just not TOGETHER! Pick ONE and write that please!

It seems a chap called Ken can’t resist Literotica and infringing on others’ copyrights.

https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/ken/My%20Virgin%20Sister.txt

Started off well and the first four chapters were good, very good. It lost credibility though when Mom got involved.

One small point; if you're going to write about the hymen please find out where it is first because it's not where you think it is.

Just like Tony in the first chapter, your story too long.

Also, Jack fucking and her not was a little odd.

Months without being caught. No, she would have looked

I see, some people are okay with bro/sis but not okay with mom/son? Moral lines have already been crossed so I don't see the reason for the dislike.

Anyway nice story

Would LOVE to see a sequel to this, Maybe Mom finds out Dad has been playing with "any port in a storm" common for stereotypical sailors. Divorces him and Her and the kids move into a 3 bedroom near school. Mom is young enough to get pregnant again, so that is why she moves in with them. Then after the kids graduate the 4 move somewhere to start the kids careers and live as married with the mother as 'in law' to the son with a small child. Easy to explain, then the daughter gets pregnant, there is so many places this could go you could keep it as a love triangle that works, or you could go wild and include co-eds, or co-workers. Maybe one finds out the son is doing the Mom and 'they' explain since she is alone with a small child she doesn't date so the daughter gives her husband permission to take care of Mom's needs. Co-ed/co-worker winds up thinking its hot and being bi/bi-curious, wants to join then 'talks' daughter into joining too. You are one of my favs and I know you could make it soo HOT.

Super build up so that by it's time for the sucking and fucking, we've gotten hard and horny just reading about all the plotting, scheming, gazing and longing. Really well done.

I loved how the brother worked the sister into a frenzy.

Well, I *was* enjoying that until mom got involved. That ruined the story for me. May I ask a small courtesy of you & other authors; if your story is under bro/sis tags, a warning if it includes parents/children, anal, threesome or group sex, please. A polite gesture to those of us who are not into those scenes. I hate when I begin to invest in a story only for it to stray into categories that are just not my thing. Well, at least I enjoyed the exclusive bro & sis parts in this story.

The bro/sis was borderline within the realm of possible... the adding mom?... Yeah I know that's a recurring theme for the writer but unfortunately pushes it into niche stuff...

One of 5 stories best written. Only wish I had a sister. Don’t care if she is a twin, older or younger. As long as she he an insatiable appetite for sex as Lisa. Would love a sequel from college. When does she get pregnant and when do they get married. And how much tighter is Lisa’s asshole than moms.

Fanfuckingtastic written story.

Lisa if you don’t marry Jack- marry me. I won’t argue your age at all.

Especially if she is a reader - buy her the early VC Andrews novels. Tons of incest written so sexily, I've been masturbating to incest porn stories ever since. I even had a partner who role played with me. It may not work for everyone, but it will make some young women more open to the idea.

Wish the description said something about the mom getting involved, moms are sooo not my thing (ewwww, yeah yeah, to each his own, I know, I'm not judging others, just turns me off), and the story was so hot until that part. Oh well. You're a good writer even so.

The boy is the father of his brother and of his son. Impressive.

Lisa was not allowed to date until she was 17 ....... They are both 18 now ... anonymous has to re-read page 1 again .

Issue there.

I lost this page for a month and now that I’ve found it again it’s so good best storie of 2018 for me

Very good story . I'm impressed.

who the fuck wrote this!! a sick bastard who lives in alabama

It's a shame that the old man had to come HOME! We could have had at least another 10 pages! I really enjoyed it keep them CUMMING!!

You have written possibly my most enjoyed story on this site! It kept me hard throughout the entire thing!

Yes, a very hot story for sure. Brother and sister in love and having hard sex constantly. Now Mom gets involved ... unbelievable in what they do but whatever works is great. A sequel would be nice .......... thank you.

Jealous! It's so Naughty but by hell it would be nice! Oh well dream on you old coot?

This story is what dreams are made of! So yeah Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★+♥♥♥♥♥ for the dreams WOOF! With my long tongue out! Yeah Man!

I don't think it could get much better One of the best stories ever.

Keep up the good work.

wish I had had a sister but my mother was more than enough. when I was 12 she caught me and a neighbor girl my age going at it. my scolding wound up with me doing her, was active until I was 27 and got married, wife and I have a 4 yo daughter, don't know yet what life will bring

What a read! Everything they did I wanted them to do! By the time it came to fucking mom I was getting so impatient, but so hot. Horny as fuck right now!!

This story was much too long to keep from fucking the girl's ass! Finally mom got it!

It was pretty good, but I liked the more "romantic" theme in the two other stories of yours I've read. This is just kind of basic; guy has hots for sister, gets her to mess around with him (which was kind of sleazy, as was spying on her; not something you do o someone you really care about, but hey, fiction). But they just turned into crazy Fuck Machines too quickly after he initial successful meeting, and it just got kind of boring after that. I think less can be more, I'd like to read about them getting a chance to finally be together only once in a while, with some risk of their secret getting out and ruining everything aroind every corner. Then when they finally get a chance to be together, it's a much more exciting, special thing. Basically this was just a long description of all the ways they spent every day fucking (but I admit my favorite part of the fantasy is when their true feelings for each other are finally admitted and acted on the first time...to me that's a lot more exciting than the ongoing relationship, when it seems that some of the earth-shaking quality of the taboo-breaking would have worn off over time. But that's just my thing, so I guess I'd better write my own story instead). Speaking of which, you totally lost me by bringing the mother in. To me that just seems weird and creepy, not hot at all.....but I'm not dumb enough to cast stones while my house is glass! Who am I to judge anyone else for what they enjoy?

Also, more actual tender romance would be nice once in a while, not just constant sex. Maybe they enjoy spending time lying under the covers together, kissing and snuggling and laughing, and NOT screwing like wild apes, just because they really enjoy each other's company and physical contact, not just "fucking" (I know, I knowm that's not what most people are probably here it read, but I think it could be a part of a story at least!). Like I said, I guess I'll just have to write my own story. God knows I used to come up with plenty, of all sorts, in my head to kill the time.

My stepsister and I had sex of some kind for 44 years until she died unexpectedly at 56 a few years ago. We didn't live in the same house so it made things difficult until I got my license and a car. We didn't know each other until she was eleven but felt an unusual attraction the first meeting and it grew from there. Somehow never got caught or even accused of any indiscretions. She did threesomes with both my wives and me but we never got into her husbands knowing anything. We used anal and oral sex for years because birth control was nonexistent in the early 60s and she loved it in her azz anyway. She was the most consistently hot woman I ever knew and had a hell of an imagination. If you take the mother part out of this it very much of it reminded me of many of our most enjoyable things. These thing happen for real much more than anyone will discuss because of the taboo even with stepsisters and parents. If there had been more than the 20 months or so difference in our ages I might would say that there could have been some issues to discuss but we were equally guilty in our curiosity about what felt good and why couldn't we do it if we wanted. I had similar sex happenings with two cousins about the same time with the same age differences but they didn't continue after we were married plus they were much more infrequent while still super hot. In this part of the country fathers, stepfathers, aunts and uncles as well as step siblings were the usual culprits. Not many mothers seemed to get involved with their own kids but others in the families.

Great story and I hope you have much success in your other writings.

It was a good story enjoyed it very much rose to the height of incest

I’m soooo wet right now some come overandfuckmypussy 👅👅👅👅👅👌👌👌😁☺️☺️

The hymen is indeed not where you think it is.

It took me multiple days to read this story, if you know what I am saying!

The story is well written and very engaging! Although the title was not correct after the first few weeks of the story, it pulled me in and I am highly encouraging you to write a sequal! You are a real talent! Absolutely loved it!

6 out of 5 stars!

It ain't where you think it is.

Sexy story nevertheless.

Samslam, after reading this story and realizing what could have been, I just wish I had been born a twin!!

Was soo sexy. Was wet the whole time. Played with myself alot

This was simply AMAZING.

But like many of the other comments mention, my main peeve with this story is the lack of a mention of any form of Birth Control. That much unprotected sex and neither Lisa or the mom (mentioning her name would've been a nice touch) got pregnant!? Though if I remember the story correctly, you had the mom's age as being 46 (where some people are getting that she's 36, making her 9 when Jack and Lisa were born, is beyond me) meaning that she is near that age where Menopause begins in some women; though there have been some instances where a woman of that age have gotten pregnant.

Also, the ending felt a bit rushed. You definitely could have expounded more on their sexual adventures when Jack and Lisa went off to collage. I know that a lot of other comments suggest that you should of had Jack and Lisa bring in a friend they made at college (a girlfriend/boyfriend, or another brother/sister duo that the befriended), but I don't think that they would bring anyone else into their sex lives like that; and especially not with their mother also already being involved.

But I do agree with some comments that ask for a sequel of some sort. It would definitely be worthwhile for you to consider, samslam. It doesn't even have to be set during Jack and Lisa's college years, it could be set 10 years after the beginning of this story. But a look at their lives after this would be nice, and make for a good read.

Again, this was simply and amazing story, samslam. 5 Stars all around.

What guys really want is a blow job??? WRONG!!! Young guys want to fuck a pussy! AND cum in it. A dick is meant for a pussy, not a mouth or an asshole. A pussy is perfect and it needs to be natural, not shaved to look like a nine year old...except for pussy liberal guys...3 stars

Virgin, wasn't on the pill? That much unprotected sex? C'mon

I read it here befor.

I love the slow build up and the kink!

Knock them up if you're gonna rev the engine let out the clutch.

I've read this story several times and it turns me on more every-time. GREAT story

Hot story. Read a few of your stories now and you have a thing about including mum's in the children's incestuous relationship. Not sure why because the stories have been hot enough without a parent included. Still a great story though. 5 star

What a fabulous story, I couldn't stop reading it, nor could I stop getting off on it

It is telling that, including mine, you have 591 comments.

SUCH AN AMAZING MASTERPIECE!! Omg youve made me so horny damn!! Im a girl btw ;) and this story makes my pussyy so wett!! thank you!! :D