by samslam
there can be no doubt that it is a H.O.T story, however plz remember that haymen is actually a tight ring outside and not inside the pussy and would have been broken the moment he entered, it can also be streched by fingering and then the first time is not as bad :) xxx
This is the best story I have read here. I have to admit it brings back some of my thoughts about my sister that never went anywhere. I came more than once reading this and stioking at the same time. Just an outstanding story.
Fantastic story. I thought introducing Mom would lower the score but you did it as part of the story. To bad the score sheet only went up to 5. A definite 10+.
It takes all kinds to make a world. For me, this story is a clear 5 when the action is between the sister and the brother. It drops to a 3 when mom shows up. That is al about taste, and clearly mine runs to people of the same age.
Nicely written.
Great story! It reminds me so much of how bad I should tuck my sister. She is a virgin but wears a C36 bra and and is smoking. Thankyou for your purely exciting and enjoyable story ;) =>()
the only things missing are as follws.
1) sis didn't fucked in her ass.
2) dad didn't catch them (mom or sis)
3} they don't have a 4 way. good . story.
This is absolutely the best fucking story I read in this page !!!
This is my favorite story of all the submissions for Literotica. Anything coming out soon?
God!! Incest stories aren't my thing ... or should I say weren't?! Wow, this is the hottest story I've ever read, when they manage to get Mom involved too ... let's just say that I've never come that often in one story!!! That was incredible, thanks for sharing.
I'm a security officer and be bored at work but I'm so glad i found this. i read a few but this is the best. it took me 2 shifts to finish it but my dick got rock plenty of times & help my day go by faster. no the less it was very intresting. guess there's nothing else to do but go home and taste my wiife jucies as you mentioned and wait for another mind blowing story ...... .thanxs for the entertainment
this was the best thing i ever read and just kept cumming over and over about it keep it up cuz this is the best ever!
This is probally one of the sexiest incest stories i have ever read ive came so many times during the story i just cant stop reading it0
verey verey good loved it never have i read or seen a love story this goood
This story was so well written! I loved how you included how the mom or lisa mastrubated. I think i came two or three times while reading this
I've read this more than once and it is so much better than just about any other story here on Literotica. First, the writing, in general is tons better as is the plot. Second the gradual progression and the slow gradual unfolding of the intimacies is done superbly.
I was a turn off when you included mom :( but other than that it was great and made me horney
My twin sisters & I loved reading this short book love story, that the only comment we got is keep writing more... PLEASE! Even our mom liked it too,& she married us 3 together & we 3 live together (without mom) & we are expecting our second child in 9weeks.
You are amazing please keep it up 1 of the very best I've read in a very long time
I think the story would have been better without including mum!!
i liked the bother and sister fucking parts but the mom was not a major turn off but it didnt really get me horny..
That was a really good one. Sucked me right in and didn't loosen its grip before the end. I didn't habve any time to think about things like believabilty or stuff.
Very well done!
Bringing mom into the story made it too long for comfort. And we have to think Lisa and mom were both on the pill. or they would certainly be preggies, but why? Explain. The buildup to Jack and Lisa's first time was very nice, but then the rest could have been developed into a second chapter.
This is amazing, I spent a few hours reading this, but it was great.
^_^
I loved it I was so hard the entire story but I agree with the other guy adding in mom was a lil bit of a turn off but overall it was great
i loved d bro sis part..
sm hw adding mom in was kinda turn off for me..
bt b4 tht.. u had me wet n craving for more..
I lost track of time as I read this story, it was so engrossing. Great story, I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Presumably, this bit of creative writing has too many grammatical errors for a Cardinal grad.
I love this story!! If only I had a twin brother who would put my feelings first!!
My dick aches because of this story. I came so much, it was enough to fill two medicine cups. Awesome job man!!!!!
I came more from this story than I have on any ever before it! I grew up with a sister just like that and we fucked like crazy until college so this story really worked me up. and the bringing the mom in was like a dream! damn that was hot! the last two pages I went without coming and then at the end I lost it and blew my load 4 feet in front of me.....damn good writer
made me wish I had a brother... I came so often that I lost count. It was just what I needed.
Fantastic story---until Mom got involved. The action between the twins was incredibly erotic; some of it was almost believable. Getting Mom in there mucking about just spoiled so much for me.
Some commenter was asking, "Where was my sister when I was that age?" Well, I didn't have a sister. Tried to use a brother, but it just wasn't the same.
this was a great overall read, very descriptive and well written, i came a total of 7 times in 2 days reading this thank you very much
I loved d story bt don't buy d idea of anal sex(never will) nd d part der mum played. Overall, gr8 story!
I hate when a guys ass gets played with :( good thing i skim anything that had anything to do with that but great story...i thought that bringing the mom into it actually worked out for the better and it also took me by surprise...kind of sad that it took till the last page for Jack to stick it in but whatever
Great story, except, I have to agree that bringing mom into the picture detracted from it. I love brother sister love but hate cheaters which her mom is.
I absolutely loved this story... I jacked off and came 4 times while reading the whole thing, idk why it got me so hard and horny after every page! I LOVE the transverse from innocent to nympho too! And the part when the mom was getting into the whole thing had me on edge. :D AMAZING. good work. I would love for you to make another one like this or a sequel to this.
the first 3/4 chapters are awesome.then it became lengthy and bringing in the Mum seemed to be unreal.The story should have ended with the sister .The impact would have been greater.I always acted similarly with my sister,younger by 2 years but unfortunately it stopped at my fingerng her wet pussy and our sucking.She was afraid to go further.We are now married both on our side and it is after 15 years that we have started to talk about these unforgettable moments and we have started again with the fingering and kissing and she has now agreed to have a sex relation with me to catch up with the time lost!!This will be done next month when we shall not join in a trip to be made by our respectve families for a period of 3 weeks.
Somehow in a desperate attempt to escape visual pornography I've wound up reading incestual love stories between brother and sister. DAMN, this was a good one but when you brought the mom into it, then it just got awkward. Either way, you are a lucky man
That story was magnificent suspense love sensuality and such sexy descriptions I wish I had an incest sister. My life would be complete. Literotica has made my teenage years the best in my life
I had to stop and take things in hand several times while reading this story. I have a sister that may or may not fit this story to tee. It could be memories or dreams I'm recalling but I'm having to go take things in hand again. Great story!!!!!!
This is proably the best incest story i have ever and while ever read! Great job!
Reminds me of my sister and how we would play together - she loved me licking her pussy for her, and would suck my cock till I came over her usually between her legs as we simulated fucking
never got to do anything with my mum but sure want to and still do - stories like this don't help repress those feelings!
I have to be up early and thanks to this genius I have up for god knows how long reading and fantasising. I have a younger sister and when she gets to a certain age I really think I'm going to look at her in a completely different way than I would have having no read this story.
Thankyou.
This story was great, had me horny from the first paragraph. hope there's more to cummmmm.
I have loved every one of your stories so far but this one really had me hooked from the first page. Believe me it brought back some long ago memories of my brother/s and most recently over the last two years, my son. I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you.
good job dude! this is the best story i've read so far! keep it up
Im a 16 year old only child, and have fantasized about fucking my mom or a girl across the street whom is a lot like my sister. dont worry about all the comments hating on you its there fault for looking into incest stories hahaha maybe they are just Trololoing lol great job thanks :D but guys... i dont need to know hom many times you have cum while reading lol
is there another one of your sex storys with your mum and sis i have cum 3 times while reading this fuck you need to start writing sex novols if not my email is supersum0@hotmail.com cant wait to read more ........the one and only fan peace
ok now im a 17 year old kid im very into incest nd i fucking love u 4 posting this story iv been up since 3 in the morning reading this it is now 6:43 nd iv had 2 hav cum over 15 times this was so fucking hot i stayed hard throu the whole thing lik i said im very into incest nd i love you 4 sharing just wish i could have been in on it;) i am going 2 mak an account stating im 18 but look 4 johnnyboy1794 ill b comming or hmu on skout john anthony puccino;DDD nd idk who sees this u want me message me on skout;DDD
wouldn't fingering ur sis hurt (hurt her)? and fucking ur mom is just wrong
I really liked this story, but fucking your sister....I could kind of get over that, but when you fucked your mum it really made me gag, alot. (In the bad way. ._. )
WELL THIS A BIT LONG BUT I THINK ITS WORTH WHILE READING SOME GREAT
HOT SPOTS AND GOOD WRITEING AND NO BACK LOGS KEPT ME INTERESTED
ALL THE WAY TO THE END A GOOD 5 PLUS STARS..................."R"........................
Great story. I'm a bit unsure about it being your mom and sister but other than that, it was great!
Good story but idk about fucking your sister and then you own mom alittle to much thats seriously not right even though i was curious and read upon this...cousins is the only exception i would probably say is ok because not forbiddin in the bible and not that much incest...
I have been putting of reading this as it said 9 pages. But this story is worth every 9 pages of it. A short preview ended up as a full story, and i forgot to sleep.
The flow is amazing. Though i didnt like it in the present tense. I feel that an all present tense story doesnt make sense, esp since your running across multiple timelines.
This story is so great that it made me cum several times and not just a small load....
i don't know who and how write this, but srsly the most erotic story i ever read.
Like whem i first read trough myself the "YUME MIRU KUSURI" Japan hentai game, pervert, and romantic in the same time whit kind of "cute" parts.
Best Regards -Smeea-
One of the BEST stories I have read that added an additional person to the mix in such a way that it didn't ruin the flow and tone of the storyline. Great job! I loved the research and experimentation parts, too, lol What fun!!
I really enjoyed this story about the incest between the brother and sister and how mom got involved this story made me really horny makes me think back to my teenage years when I did my two sisters this was well written story I really enjoyed it so much
i like the way u wrote this story i really like .and the way how u describe the events movments behaviours u'r the best describer i see in my life nnnnnnnnnnnnnnniiiice
call me class perev, but like it was said. Perfect length, detail and ending m more pls..
i fuck my maid and she was a slut that is why i hired her but you are sick dude it would have been better if she was your step sister
I loved how well you used detail and natural curiousity/ perviness young guys normally have... This was just the right length, any more & it'd have been too drawn out, any shorter and detail would have sufferred too much. For several aspects of incest, this was great, virgin twin sister with slightly experienced brother, then the way they work on their mom, until they gang up on her to seduce her into a 3some. Glad you gave it closure at the end too with them having an apartment together as they went off to college & their mom coming for visits. I have to wonder whether Mom or the daughter is going to end up pregnant at some future time as a result of this! make an interesting little sequel I think...