All Comments on 'My Wasteland Angel Bk. 01'

..just hope you will you will publish your second part soon!

Couldn't stop reading it!!! My compliments and best regards!!!!!

I think your work is well written. The story is captivating, and your characters are well liked. I look forward to more of the story, and want a happy ending. Thank you.

Usually not a fan of longer stories but this was amazing. Great story

Looking forward to more! Thank you!!

You warned us you didn't know when you would post the next part. I hope it will be soon as I would love to read it all.

Thanks for sharing this part of your novel.

The setting is a lot of fun and has loads of potential. The characters are really engaging and I can't help but love them.

Now for some criticism; you shift tenses constantly and it makes me want to rip my hair out. Just stick to past tense as if the character is writing about what happened in a journal.

On a more personal note, I really hope that Gabriela gets over her bullshit quickly because the way she treats Willow is cruel and immoral and makes my skin crawl.

The setting is a lot of fun and has loads of potential. The characters are really engaging and I can't help but love them.

Now for some criticism; you shift tenses constantly and it makes me want to rip my hair out. Just stick to past tense as if the character is writing about what happened in a journal.

On a more personal note, I really hope that Gabriela gets over her bullshit quickly because the way she treats Willow is cruel and immoral and makes my skin crawl.

This is such an amazing story but you’re going to ruin it if you introduce current politics and discussions about skin color of humans when there are orcs and mutants around. Categories like white and latina don’t make any sense in a post apocalypse scenario. It severely breaks the immersion.

Can’t wait !!!

once I started, I had to finish it all the way to the end. The sex was very satisfying, and I really am rooting for Gabby and Willow.

I think the coming conversations about whether Willow is a man or a woman to Gabby are....well, they ain't gonna be fun. But I also can't wait for this pair to (hopefully) come out the other side stronger together than before.

Keep up the good work! ^^)/

Good story I hope you finish it.

I hope you write a part two to this tale and a 3 and 4. I really loved the characters and story. It would be a shame to not have a follow up.

Oh boy! This story really need to continue!

Great story and characters. Please continue!

Amazing story! I know you warned us about stopping suddenly, but I am hooked!

Please continue!

Cheers...