by tulsatime39
Well told, but please, PLEASE get an editor! There are way too many typos, and they spoil what could be a much better story.
And you couldn't be bothered to inform people of that fact before they open the story? Is it your own story you don't give a fuck about or the readers?
If there is any truth to this story (I’m hoping there is), you are one very lucky guy. I’m looking forward to the next chapter(s). I enjoyed it very much.
I personally liked this story and am looking forward to another chapter!
Again a very hot story, very well written. I found this one disturbing (which might make ma a prude), family members should stay out of each other's way dick-wise, but a weekend at the lake is always a fabulous moment and adds this incredible atmosphere....
So well done, even though the family guy in me was bristling.....