All Comments on 'My Widowed Mom and Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
One star

How many asses do these girls have as you need a proof reader to check your spelling as its ass not asses

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hard to read.

This was very hard to read. If this was a translation then it was awful.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 3 years ago
Good But....

It could stand a good proof reader to to correct some errors in grammar and interpretation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bad story ...

Its not bad because I understand which race have written it so a person on an Indian race might phrase their wording different from others. Most english speaking / reading people thing their language is the only correct language. But is a bad story because of content ... the other young woman was a dyke who prey on young girls for her male lover. Mr. Surya punk ass couldn't get a women for himself so he used a weak minded dyke to do it for him.

falgunifalguniover 3 years ago
Highly sexciting

Though many seem to have disliked the story, I found this highly erotic and sexciting. Surely, many like me will add it to their favourite stories.

bizarre_mbizarre_mover 3 years ago
Wow story

Just superb plot for an erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Couldn't get past the beginning - poor command of the English language.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

No excuses ... I don't know how it got approved ...

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