All Comments on 'My Wife'

English isn't your primary language, right? It shows in the way you put the wording together. Anyway, too much description, to little dialog and o movement of the story line.

Great idea for a Bollywood movie I guess.

makes no sense and somebody help him,he can't be that dumb.

Really enjoyed the premise of newlyweds. It would have been nice to make it a bit more believeable, such as the husband NOT being in the next room. Maybe if u spread it out over a few days, and didn't end so abruptly, so we can see a pattern of Reena beginning to enjoy being a slut.

Anyways, carry on!

stupid and non-erotic - basically a sick story - nice foundation for a marriage with a wimp husband eh!

Not believable, no husband would simply leave his wife to be raped and have her virginity stolen by some punk ass 17 year old. Not only that but why would you bring your wife to a place like that, it doesn't make sense and sounds a bit stupid. Just my thoughts anyway I thought it was really bad.

Enjoyed your story wish you would extend it.

Even for an averagely built guy like myself i would have fought tooth and nail and beat the living crap out of anyone who so much as looked insultingly at MY newly wed wife.

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He let his wife be raped. A virgin no less. Now what she only wants big dicks or is she pregnant.he is a chuck. What a dumb story.

We Pakistanis have more balls than you matherchods!

Adios, gracias.

Strangely sexy.