All Comments on 'My Wife finds Her Kink'

Your writing is excellent. I liked the story even if it hit a few of my squicks.

At least you know how to spell.

This guy should learn to say what he needs to say. She had no right to order him to be sexual with the other guy. He needed to refuse and talk it over with her before she took it for granted that it was going to happen. The servant man had no right to ask for anything outside their previous agreement. She should not have consented to this. She needs a good spanking and learn humility. Also, look for divorce papers in their future.

Thank you for your comment. I'm happy to hear you liked my writing. I'm new to writing and Im trying new things and hopefully getting better. Curious: what's a squick and what were they?

Thanks for your comment. You are absolutely right that characters in my story did things they should not have. That was a part in the story. Hmmm, getting her a spanking could easily have been something that happened. Sequel?

Virtually all of my stories are about a man who is reluctant to suck a cock for one reason or another. This time, while he wanted to suck a cock on some level, he did it because he was commanded to by his wife.

Are there other ways you would like to see a reluctant man do that?

Some of the story was iffy and some was sexy. In the end it was great. Good job

It was sexy and well-written. You plunged into the unknown depths of two very interesting human minds and discovered an interesting dynamic. You dealt with everything, including the conflict on all levels, without resorting to the usual hyperbolic extremes we see on this site. The wife wasn't a monster as so many dominant women are portrayed. Instead, you expertly revealed her inner turmoil and the way she dealt with it. On the whole, it was a good, imaginative love story with a decent HEA. You successfully negotiated the rocky channel without wrecking upon the many shoals of tropes, memes, stereotypes or clichés that infest the Straits of Literotica. That John wasn't packing a 15-inch monster serves you well in that respect. Realistic, when written with a certain aplomb, is magnificent. Bravo... 5+++/5!

Love love loved this story!!! Really hope you wrote more in this storyline too. Keep up the great work, truly enjoyed it! Thx for sharing! X

Interesting, different from many that the anonymous crowd hate. I'll read more of your stories. Thank you

Loved it! Anytime a man's wife is the "reason" that he sucks cock, it's hot.

I just kept reading this story wondering where it was going and when it finely revealed its destination I was expecting something else. Then I read the very ending of this story and was so thoroughly impressed. This story was one of the more realistic erotic stories I’ve read, yet that didn’t make it less erotic, just more real and pleasurable. This is a must read story, especially if you enjoy a couple who truly love each other. Great writing and a fabulous premise.