All Comments on 'My Wife Fired Me'

Loved it ! Another great story. I would’ve like to heard a little more about Jenny and Todd after the husband left. Looking forward to your next story.

THOUGHT IT WAS A GOOD TALE...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

For the love of god stop with the radio station operating details! No one cares. It’s as boring as shit!

He said in the note that there is no reconciliation when she filed for separation. Yet, he forgive her like a piece of cake. She humiliated, lose trust, had a date and probably had sex with his enemy of state. Forgiveness is out of the picture here. Lame and Cowardly act.

Well, we finally got passed all the boring details of radio station operations and ownership but now we’re on to retirement fund minutiae. Show us some mercy! “You’re killing me Smalls!”

Good story. I thought the Todd seduction was not explained well enough though

'Miket' comments 'poor execution'. I have no idea what that means, but I liked the story. Yes, detailed in stuff I wasn't familiar with, but it's always interesting to see inside others' lives. And if I can clear up a common misconception about Florida, as an almost lifelong resident, hurricanes do come, and every year, but they almost never hit YOU. Altho way bigger than tornadoes, still a distance of a few miles from the eye can be a huge difference in the damage caused. I've been in some 'afternoon breezes' in Utah and Idaho that put our hurricanes to shame.

I enjoyed this story. I found the info about the radio station business very interesting. So I'm glad that you included it. Early on the M/C easily recognized that his wife was humiliating him - professionally for sure - and possibly even personally. Where there's smoke, there's fire. That's why the M/C needed to find out more about the rumors of his wife's possible infidelity with Todd. I do understand that the M/C loved his wife. Yet he welcomed her back with open arms before ever finding out if she and Todd had carried on an affair PRIOR to their legal separation. That missed the mark for me. I don't mind that they got back together at all. But he should have made sure that she hadn't been a cheating whore prior to their separation. Past behavior predicts future behavior. BRB

Oh damn! Now we’re back to the radio station BS. Is there a LW story buried in here somewhere?

This would have been a good 3K word story instead of the 15K words the author used to tell it. Everyone who really liked this story must still listen to FM radio! 🤣

Great story, good job however some missing parts could be very interesting , see Reggy69 comment's.

Feels like something's missing. Hubby's replaced for advancement by some bullshitter who not only fools his wife but, in the end, the CEO, Hubby winds up losing his job (quitting?) & winds up being belittled by his wife & both daughters. The reconciliation, tho not at any cost, came much too fast- esp. for his wife. Should've had to feel a bit more, but she travelled in the hurricane, perhaps made some of the trip by foot, and all is well? 3 stars. Was written well but the ending reconciliation killed it. He forgave much too fast. Bob

Not too bad, but the way the wife turned on her husband when Todd undermined him was too fast and too extreme. Just not believable

I tried to give it a 3 but it can't go anywhere above 1. A wife that disrespects, mistreats and cheats on her husband as well as alienate his children from him is not someone that can be trusted.

Technically proficient writing, and I always enjoy reading about a man pursuing his dreams. I DON’T enjoy reading a story where the MC handles everything so poorly. Yes, running away worked out, but he’s a fool for not dealing with Todd immediately, in some way, regardless of the boss liking him. The MC also should’ve punished the wife somehow for her disrespect.

Believing the slut that she hadn’t been sexual with Todd is the worst foolishness. She was riding him before she was promoted, and that’s why she promoted him over her husband.

As for finding her on his doorstep, he should’ve left her there to die. If he saved her, it should’ve been as a cruel mercy, where he didn’t properly treat her wounds. Let her have a massive facial scar to match her inner ugliness. Taking her back was just insane.

So much for it not being a RAAC. She didn’t pay any cost. She was fired by the dumbass who liked Todd. She didn’t repent, and humble herself. She went to her husband so he could rescue her from her foolish choices. If she hadn’t been let go from her job, she would’ve continued to put her pride over her family.

There was potential in this story. Too bad.

ZK

Name error;

It's been ten years since Hurricane Helen, and life is pretty good.

Should read

It's been ten years since Hurricane karen, and life is pretty good.

Decent story once I skipped over the boring, monotonous and unnecessary technical filler about radio stations. A 5 page story that should have been 3.

poor poor stupid cuck, I wonder why Todd never sent him the pictures of him fucking Jenny

Jenny would have been tossed to the curb.

Too quick to take her back. He should insist she get her own place and she get an std test. He may love her but trust is gone. She believed tod over him. No way back from that.

good story but after catching Todd in the office with her there had to be more to her and Todd's relationship

Very entertaining and a good read.

Speaking of radio…. I still miss Rush.

If the wife doesn't have to do anything significant to earn a reconciliation, it is by definition a RAAC.

You reconciled them regardless of how much she humiliated and disrespected him with the firing... and then she goes on a date with Todd? That was grounds for instant divorce right there.

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This is why reconciliation stories never work.

The cheating wife would need to grovel like a whipped dog... for months, if not years... to make up for her appalling behaviour. It is *extremely* hard, if not impossible to restore trust in a relationship after it's been broken. Very few literotica authors have the spine to make these self-centred narcissists actual pay the price for burning their marriage to the ground.

"And it is not a RAAC story. "

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Yes, it was, a very big RAAC tale.

I enjoyed this. Thank you!

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Be well!

The constant name switches during the story was more than annoying and detracted from the story, which l liked a lot l might add.

I score the tale 4/5 and thank you Stoney for a good story.

Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Yes, he was rather abrupt with his daughters. However, what so many comments below seem to have missed is that they both attacked him rather than asking for his side. They opened fire and he responded in kind.

Further, as college aged children, no, they have no more claim to involve themselves in their parents' marriage than their parents will have to involve themselves in their marriages. They are now adults, not dependents.

Great story.

Please keep writing!

What a disappointing ending. The wife's side of the story reduced to 10 hurriedly delivered lines. Instant acceptance. It was supposed to be a momentous event and you wrote it like you were bothered it took you time away from writing about radio broadcasting.

Not a RAAC my ass. The wife throws the husband under the bus with zero qualms, then comes back and gives a bullshit apology only because she got the same treatment and all ends well? You couldn't even be bothered to have them really talk about their issues and just hand waved everything away for your happy ending.

I found it impossible to care about any of the characters.

That being said, I didn't _dis_ like the story; I just couldn't like it.

nice fun story. great job.

I thought I was reading an accountants story. Terrible read.

Good story but long and detailed without any lw except the firing never said whether she had sex with Todd

Use some tags. I read this only because I have liked some of your stories in the past, but not this one. Too much technical radio talk. I couldn't tell if Jenny had an affair or not but with the level of disrespect and contempt she showed her husband, it didn't really matter. IMO she was unforgivable. The husband came across as totally spineless and his kids were as bad as the wife. The end result was a total absence of likable characters.

"and it's not a RAAC story." Really? I'm not so sure. Whether it was or not, I didn't like it. I don't like RAAC stories and if this one isn't one, it seems like one (at least to me).

As usual your best efforts.

no. Just NO. MOST of the time stoneywebb writes good and oi great LW stories. But this is NOT one of them

The story is ridiculous and is contrived.

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There was a piece of information that comes out on page 3 which should have come out on page 1 . it is this piece of conversation from the main character to his wife:

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...."We talked many times about the possibility of our moving up when our bosses retired. And when we talked about me possibly being the Vice President of Production, you always said I deserved it. But when you had a chance to make it happen, you gave the job to Todd, so fuck you and the horse you rode in on. Right now, I don't give a flying fuck what you want to do about our marriage. I'm sure Todd will warm your bed if you get lonely."....

The problem with the story is that if the husband had said that at the beginning of the story to the wife ... she would HAVE to answer specifically why she was breaking her word to her husband and giving the job to Todd. This would give the husband the chance to show that Todd's so-called expertise and skill was actually a bunch of lies and deceit and he was taking credit for the husband's work.

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By not having this conversation in the beginning of the story the whole thing becomes contrived. The wife gets very angry digs in and won't listen to reason and the husband cannot make a rational coherent argument.

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badly done.

damn good

Not one of your better stories. Too much about radio stations and not enough about relationships. It was disturbing that he did nothing about his wife's cheating and immediately forgave his daughters lack of love and trust.

It read like the author had a pre-prepared check list that he ticked off. The whole reconciliation with the kids and the wife was so poorly executed as to be beyond unbelievable. . .

I think LW may have become quagmired in tropes.

Boring. Husband and wife work together. Husband and wife fight. Husband gets new job. Wife leaves old job and goes to work with husband. Look the same story in 23 words.

For those who asked, there was another story with a similar theme of a man buying a small radio station. But the similarities pretty much ended there. The other one was a BTB if I remember correctly. Also, the other used the station to help others get out of tough life situations whereas this one had his daughters help build the station.

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Both stores were good. This was a little more technical which was fine with me.

Trash. It's like they had to have a talk, interrupted it for some radio tech business course for the wannabe startup self-employed fag that was dogshit boring as hell, and then finished the talk to make up. You can throw away everything between the first and last page and have a more coherent story, albeit it will lack the bullshit about "how to make money with a radio-station". Good riddance..

I don’t really give a fuck about his radios or the station bs. I just wanna know more about Chad and Jenny.

Well done , thank you.

I think it needed less writing about operating a radio station, and more character development. The relationship plot was too barebones, so the characters never seemed realistic. The story concept was good though—it has potential

She was definitely having sex with Todd. No retribution for wife or todd.only a 1.

Decent story.

A part 2 that tells her side, gives more detail into the relationship with the daughters and her angst as her professional and personal standing degrade could be in order.

I always appreciate your writing and stories!

Nicely Done! Thanks for sharing it.

I found it interesting that though there a number of wife firing husbands with varying results none of them are listed in the similar story section

Apparently author still hasn't figured what RAAC is. Because he just wrote one. In order to reconcile the irreconcilable, he had to lobotomize the MC. A socially conscious and intelligent man can't figure out his wife was already fucking around. And she only came back when her AP turned against her. No way that dude would be so informed about the inner dealings of his marriage without hitting some of that. And after such blatant disrespect, he was worried if the slut takes his leaving as permanent abandonment. Why wimpy dudes like that think they deserve any respect, is beyond me. Always reactive, never proactive, always budging to wife's demands, getting shit from his brat daughter with no consequence...Why on earth this wimp demands respect from his slut wife or anyone really? Respect is earned and nothing about his actions and personality does that.

vert verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry good

The plot was totally lost in the bushes of the radio station business details. I hope most readers found the seminar interesting, but I wanted to find out if she thought Todd was as a better fuck than her husband. I don't know how many times she fucked Todd, but he must have under performed badly if she drove through a hurricane to get back with her clueless cuck. Wonder why Todd never sent the stupid cuck the pictures he took. Someday he will, in somebody's sequel. Now that story won't get bogged down in radio station minutia.

@Powersworder, reconciliation stories CAN work, but they're difficult, particularly if the offense is great and/or the contrition is lacking. One thing that hurts here, as I mentioned earlier, is that it was based on her getting fucked over by the bad guys. If she hadn't been, I doubt she would have come crawling back to him.

Enjoyable story, but I thought the reconciliation was much too fast and easy. A simple "he played me, I'm so sorry" shouldn't be all it took. But that's just my opinion, as I felt the wife should have eaten much more crow for what she put her husband through, especially with the how she tried to use the kids against him (even if indirectly). Still, 5*. Thanks for sharing it.

Nice story!!!! 5 stars from here!

A nice, clear story with a happy ending - and it looks as if Todd didn't actually seduce Jenny?? Thank you for posting it.

Enjoyed the story!

Very enjoyable read.

The control element is a danger zone

in most relationships.

So it's very fitting it gets attention in LW stories.

This story does that.

Well written, interesting and believable.

Top ratings from me.

No, just no.

So his family (daughters and wife) disrespects, betrays, and lies to him. And basically he just says OK and goes on. The MC needs to grow a spine.

Good job

great story Stoney enough said 5 stars

Finally figured it out why this story rang a bell with me.

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This story is very very similar in plot-line to an out-standing QHML1 story "Let Go" 09/2018, but without the technical jargon. The wife also listens to a company snake and loses her way. While the maligned husband makes good as others recognized his abilities and were willing to get behind him, along that road he stumbles into a needy family that needs help and fills out his life. The 'hurricane' became the curmudgeon 'grandpa'. "Let Go" turns into a heart jerking story, becoming a highly ranked LW story.

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So I stand by my prior 3.9*, as originality is lacking displacing the kids with techno crud.

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Hooyah

“Let go” redo.

Reconciliation, yes. RAAC, no.

Good story as usual.

Thank you.

Way to much information about radio station operations. Sometimes the story was a snooze. I for one want to be entertained by the story , I don't need to know how to run a radio station. 3 stars from Xluckylee

@Syzyguy, she told him she had a date with Todd.

Excellent story.

Very good story, it held my interest throughout. It was also very believable. It deserves a 5b stars.

I'm thinking you need to rename this ' I bought a radio station ' .

Then perhaps you can write about the reason why giving us all the details regarding your wife's fascination with Todd , how they interacted without you being in the way , how her running of that business started to suffer ( as you expected it would ) etc etc .

There's plenty of decent stories on here regarding the husband being fired by his wife , unfortunately this comes nowhere close to them .

Thanks for posting and allowing comments .

DK . 3 *

I really enjoyed this story, I’m a sucker for this type of make up story. Thanks for the time and effort. KS

I've never been interested in the minute details of the radio business. It bores me. I do enjoy stories about people, relationships, mistakes, and recovery. You failed.

Well written. Not erotic at all. Should be moved to non-erotic category. Or better yet, a website dedicated to radio stations...

Still, definitely well written. Good luck to the author and thanks for sharing.

Enjoyed it but skipped most of the radio station stuff. Could have been half as long or you could have put more detail about the actual issue at hand... The wife's thought process and interaction with Todd and get daughters, what got the daughters to come back, etc.

I have to agree with some of the others. I think this is definitely an RAAC story even if the author says it's not. Basically, Jenny didn't really sacrifice anything to regain her marriage, which while very forgiving of her husband, is almost the definition of a RAAC story. Sure, she got to experience the karma of being screwed over by Todd just like what she helped facilitate to her husband, but that's not a sacrifice - just the expected outcome of her own actions. Really, what Jenny should have done was quit her job BEFORE the confrontation with Hammet. It would have been a shorter story, but I think it would have been a better one if she was given the choice between her job and her pride, or moving down and helping her husband get that new radio station started, she had resigned and chosen the latter. It would have shown her sincerity in placing her marriage above her job.

I really enjoyed this story although it did start to drag towards the middle and I would have loved to have heard more about Todd and his situation with the wife. You mentioned multiple times what Todd had told Jenny about what her husband would do and why he would do it which screamed of emotional cheating by spending all the time with Todd and talking about personal marriage things that Jenny never even brought up to her husband. All that was totally skipped over which I think would have been a major factor in being pissed at his wife.

I really like this premise, and I think it was more original than the other stories that I've read like this, but I have to admit there are a couple of big flaws with this story. First off - too much radio jargon. I get it that you like radio, but most of us don't know and don't care that much about the technical details. A little bit here and there to make the story seem authentic is great, but this was too much. We also didn't need to know how much money was in his account, how much things cost, etc - if the number of dollars he has isn't significant to the plot, like "He had a $1 million dollar life insurance policy on his wife, and now she was missing..." then it's not worth going into that much detail.

The second thing that I think was wrong with this story is that Jenny really only came back to her husband when she was backstabbed by Todd and lost her job. She should have realized long, long before then what was going on and it should have been related to the readers, even if you had to write Jennys POV, because as it stands it just sounds like she got fired and didn't have anywhere else to go but back to her husband. That really doesn't feel like an authentic reconciliation to me.

Other than that, I kind of liked the story, at least the start of it. I would love to see someone rewrite it and spend more time focusing on the relationship between the husband and wife and less on the radio station.

I actually really enjoyed this story, up until his wife just said a paragraph or two about how she'd been wrong and all was forgiven just like that. She was way too disrespectful imo to be forgiven that easily. That's just not fun to read in a story when you spent the last 4 pages stewing over her being such a massive bitch

I agree with others. Similar to the story, “Let Go.” Still four stars for good writing.

Okay story. "let go" by qhml1 was much better

4 Stars on a good story . Yes it does remind me of the Let Go Story . But i liked it

"What we regret most in life is not what we try and fail at; it's the things that we never try at all."

Agreed!

Not good. She cans him he should divorce her immediately and ask for alimony. That'll get her attention. With her attitude he needs a divorce anyway he can get one.

Excellent story! Sorry the Author isn't publishing any more. Too bad because you are a very good Author and I'd follow if you came back! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS and a BIG FUCKING thank you!

Very well-written tale!

An excellent story, even without the BTB. It moved right along with our MC pursuing other interests instead curling with a bottle or feeling sorry for himself. Wish I could have done that, I couldn't hold a job for two years after my wife left to look for my replacement. But somehow I met a good woman and she got me back on track. 5 stars.

Very good story, well written, but the wife got off very lightly indeed.

He's gotta get a divorce. Grab Alimony from her too, while he's at it

Agree, wife got off very lightly. He took her back just like that? Nah, dude.

Слишком легко жену простили! Ведь по факту она решила вернуться ТОЛЬКО когда ее уволили! До этого ее всё устраивало. Так что муж все же слабак, что так легко простил и ее и дочерей, которые тоже показали себя как предатели

I enjoyed your tale, thank you Stoney - 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

There were more numbers in there than in the average report from the NYSE... Engineer meets accountant or something like that...

The author seemed more intent on the numbers and being smug about all the deals being made and the financial stuff that the romance / reconciliation got lost.

There was no real catharsis in this. The daughters cry and he forgiven. The wife gives a summary of what happens and he forgives. There's no meat in that part, no real sense of "work" or overcoming on the wife's part. There's no recalibration after all the clear focus out on how awful she was and contemptuous.

I think she fucked Todd, then it went wrong and she felt a fool so is trying to find her redemption. That's how it LOOKS. Why dare Todd at all? "He only wanted to get into my pants". Well why did she go on a date then?

The premise is sound but the delivery falls flat at the end. We needed a ranting call against their former boss castigating him; the wife needed some actual remorse and time devoted to their discussion; the daughters needed to have time explaining themselves. Or the husband should have spelled things out otherwise it feels like drama for dramas sake.

Or... John went outside and saw Jenny knocked over and clearly in pain and needing help. The look of desperation in her eyes was much like he felt when he was emotionally knocked over and in pain needing his wife's help when she threw him under the bus. She cried out, "John please help me!" John walked over carefully knelt down and said softly. "A while back I cried out to you in pain and sorrow. Do you remember your reaction? You smirked at me, clearly disgusted and told me to stop being childish and grow up." Jenny's eye's were widening with horror. "So, slut," he said with a smirk, "Grow up, stop being so childish and save yourself." With that he went back inside and closed the door. Tiffany asked what happened he simply replied, "Some old trash just blowing through the yard." Jenny's corpse was found the next day about two blocks down the street. The daughters cried and cried, John just smiled and got on with his life. ... This ending is much better, the husband doesn't end up a sissy wimp cuck to his wife and daughters.

@previous Anonymous: That is unspeakably dark and had zero to do with the story. The author made it clear that no one cheated on this story. It is about their careers, their stubbornness, the snake that was Todd, and their crappy communication. How does her firing her husband, while yes humiliating and unfair from his and the reader's perspective, not to mention her obdurate stubbornness, merit her d4nise with no compassion or mercy. That is twisted. Yes she went out on one date with Todd, after their separation, and oh by the MC went on a few dates as well. She fended off Todd as she realized he was a.pussyhound (finally). Then she got betrayed. People make mistakes. For some the firing would merit a divorce. I mean people divorce over money, careers, and finances all the time. It wasn't like he made a timid or light decision when he uprooted and moved to Florida. That shocked her. Her reactions showed she had not cheated to Todd. Just that she was unwisely listening to thr Grima Wormtongue (LoTR reference). And she clearly didn't hold her husband to the half the monthly house expenses because he made peanuts the first six months or so. Honestly I can see why the daughters would be so upset. He left and practically abandoned them.and their mother. His talk about coming up on long weekends and holidays was just vapid noise. That isn't a marriage. He was right to.be angry about being passed over and Todd jumping over him. He was wrong to think that the wife would just accept him buying a radio station without flipping out. It is a big decision. Not to mention it required him to move to Florida and work like a dog. Her references yo "Todd said..." are worrisome but no worse than his stone cold allegations of Todd being her boyfriend. My criticism is that they were apart with no communication for like what 9 months, including the separation. They were both too stubborn. The author.made it clear it is not A RAAC and no one cheated, nor even had sex with another partner after the separation. This story was about other things entirely. Enjoyed it. Was creative. Numbers were excessive but didn't bother me as much as most people. Diverting and entertaining read. 5 stars.

Endeavor to persevere. Thanks for your writing.

They were separated for what? A year or so? She definitely fucked Todd, multiple times too I think. She was an arrogant, disrespectful, selfish woman. How he managed to stay married to her is amazing in itself.

I do think though, that moving 6 hours drive away, buying the station, taking all his clothes and some furniture, surely does 'infer' that the marriage is over.

Nice story, got me through an hour of a boring night shift