All Comments on 'My Wife Takes a Second Job'

Even a stroke story should be readable!

Do you imagine in this fantasy that you're the fucktard Stout, brown-noser Tom or the pathetic husband?

Doesn't matter because none of the characters are worth being or reading about.

If you really want to do something author, quit posting.

Instead of being fucked, the courts would have fucked him, the other inmates would be fucking his ass and she would be fucking him in the wallet as the courts reward her.

Or is that too difficult a concept for you to write about?

A really worthless piece of writing that can only tempt some of the really depraved and basic readers out here

I have to agree with @Whackdoodleand @dyonysos...This is a bad story!!! With the contract and the harassment and the fotos he took, soon she would own the company...But this story is sad because another thing: To be poor doesn't mean that a woman or a man will accept this kind of shit!!! This kind of writing doesn't respect people that have to work hard to support their family...1*

Why take the time to write something like this, wrong category should ne in Junk category

Just another demented pervert who thinks women are dog shit, and his stories treat them accordingly. Wanna see some dog shit, author? Go look in the mirror. Or get Bonnie to send you some selfies, anonymously.

his wife the whore and him on his knees begging he to let him lick the cum out of her pussy! And then there's his mother and father both strays and mutts! But the best one is dear old annony himself sucking cocks!

This reads like it was written by a kid. I suggest you take some on line writing courses if you intend on posting more. This is embarrassing.

good story

If you are going to write you should at least learn the difference between to, too, and two as well as there, their, and they're since you managed to use the wrong ones every time. I find that homonyms--words that sound alike but are spelled differently and have different meanings--cause amateur writers the most trouble. This was written an a junior high school level.

Even stroke stories have to have some logical connection to the real world of 2015. Would anyone really or even possibly even think of doing these acts?

This is not ypur story !!!!!

You REALLY can't write. This was a trainwreck. Almost completely unreadable. Dialogue by a ten year old? Awful.

gave it a 5

you start a story where the shit hits the fan in the first paragraph and makes it really not sexy already then. what do you expect ? a Hooray! 1 star

Thank you. Someone who gave this more than a moment's thought -- which rules out the writer. A simple audio recorder or smartphone could do wonders for creating a case against the asshole.

a big old 5 for your effort

I read this same story awhile ago.

# 1

We all know the way this guy writes. Making this women into a total whore from a good housewife. Just pure trash!

What's the second job? She works full time at this one. The story hasn't changed much since the last time it was submitted either.

Ah for a wife like this. Sweet. Hot. Sexy.

Sweep this trash out of this category and dump it into the garbage can. Ignore that cunt bonnietaylor2, she wouldn't know a good story if it bit her in the ass. 1*

but you DESPERATELY need an editor. Too many mistakes!

3*'s but if not better it will be 1 next time.

I've read this story on here before

...you care so little for either the story or your audience or even your own work, that you let something out of the keep with more errors of grammar and spelling,mean a second grade telling of last summer's activities.

This sad thing is cemented now, in minds and the archives as a testament to a poverty of effort, with a very large number of issues with the story itself, and little or no care for the characters.

Shame, shame.

Worthless crap

You look good on you

or did you just let the 12 monkeys loose on the 12 typewriters?

... any comment.

This is pathetic.Really. Sorry, but you can't write.

This is a majestic example of everything that is wrong with this website.

THIS IS A STORY. FICTION. FANTASY. HOWEVER YOU SHOULD PUT IT IN NON-CONSENT CATEGORY

In a story like this nothing has to be totally plausible.

What is missing is her consent.

In a good Loving Wife story she likes to have her boss's dick shoved deep in her pussy. You made the wife a victim of sexual exploitation.

Otherwise the story is a perfect jack off fantasy.

The wife was depicted masterfully.

But she is not a loving wife.

She does that for her family.

If she has an orgasm or two in the process, so be it, it's not her fault (it comes with the territory!)

A wife is much better in bed if her boss is fucking her too.

I admittedly am a sick fuck & if she were my wife i would instruct her to tell the boss that only one man can fuck her. See-thru blouse is OK & so is no bra rule.

Also i would be nice to her & very gentle in bed to help her adjust to knew realities.

I wish you had submitted this story in non-consent category. Failing that, the story tags should have been more clear about non-consent nature of the storyline.

But it needs more detail. This is poorly written and bored me to the point I couldn't finish it.

Husband finds out calls in an investigator gets evidence and takes the boss to the cleaners after he is put in jail for rape. Of course the wife is divorced as publicly as possible so that her family is shamed as much as possible. This is the ending the story cried out for.