All Comments on 'My Wife's Best Friend Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good but one continuity issue

In chapter 1, they have a rare, wife requested, anal experience. In this chapter it seems like that one episode never happened. In a continuing story line keep the history straight. Nice story other than that one minor point.

DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

They need to have a threesome

Laura should enjoy watching Donna fucking her husband and suck his cum from her cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sexy Hot

You are one luck A$$ dude, so you need to work on your strength and hope they get a little more writing. Thanks

ker63469ker63469over 3 years ago

Love this story. Is is refreshing to see a want get turned on by her husband having sex with someone else, it is usually a guy thing. A few minor issues with flow bit nothing serious

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is an excellent story, well-written, but would have been better without the adulterous element.

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I love writing about all kinds of delightful sexual encounters. The majority of my stories are based on real life experiences, which is why most of them are told in the first person.