by W1ndmus1c1an
One 'p' makes it 'moping', as in feeling sorry for oneself..."He moped around aimlessly"
There are two 'p's in mopping
(Now that I've typed it out...it seems... rude)
5* + favourite point...excellent work of "fiction"...Mi
Great story loved every minute of it got so into the story I honestly can’t tell you if there were any errors. Sorry you not going to be writing for a while because you write so well. Looking forward to your next adventure. Thanks for the great work.
Excellent! Just Excellent! Good flow and pace, good imagination, conversations and feel!
MS sucks. Ending was too sad, predictable, and inevitable. This fantasy story was well-written and the best possible spin you could ever put on this tragic situation, but unfortunately, it was a fantasy...
All I have to say is thank you for writing and sharing this story. I am sorry that 5 stars is all I can give.
This is my life and has been for 30 years, minus the sex with anyone else. A little too close for comfort for me.
An excellent job combining graphic sex with love and romance. Based on what you shared, I can only imagine how hard this story was to write. For what my opinion is worth, what was a top notch story. Looking forward to more submissions after your sabbatical.
Fantastic story, not all fiction, I'm sure. Fine example of true adult behavior, and deepest love on everyone's side. thanks