by shane_orion
I have to laugh at some of the comments on these stories, as if they are grading papers in their own high school fantasy. Personally, I like the creative writing when reading these type of "pleasure stories". I am not sure I could enjoy a perfect English written story of watching a cheating wife.
I saw this story as it unfolded. Forget the comments of people to weak to put a name behind their comments. Keep writing and enjoy the process!
~Herb McClellen
Retired English Professor
California Community College
...you''re off to a good mix throughout the chapters...keep developing this one...the fact that she LOVES BIG BLACK remains her forte'...so give her all she wants...more BLACK STALLION PIPE LAYERS...YOU GO GIRL!!!XXXXXXXXXXXXOOXOXOXOXOXO...;)))
Please write some more . I loved the story,it got me going ,I gave my vibe a hard workout. KATIE in NEW JERSE$Y
They need to to separate and maybe just be friends.
The very first time she cheated (black or white) with Alex indicated that she was quite comfortable with whomever or whatever she wanted. She doesn't seem to be the least bit concerned with a monogamous relationship with her husband; however, seems to want to be discreet - but - that doesn't stop her from extra curricular sex with others (black I guess), fine...so she should be single to sex around. Husband needs to realize his wife is an adulterer and that infidelity doesn't seem to concern her in the slightest. I don't think he has cuckold tendacies so he should think about swinging openly with her or divorcing.
I like the way she fucks with any black cock that comes her way - carry on girl - that's your mission - to fuck as many black cocks as you can - as every white woman or girl should do - made me fuckin horny
Shane, just write the gay stories that are in you, leave the women out bitch, and just be your little gay self.