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All Comments on 'My Winter with Becky'

by PatWBanon

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JeanLesMis13JeanLesMis13over 1 year ago

I think you have good ideas, but their execution needs some tweaking. Some grammar issues and phrasing took me out of it, but the outline and the imagery were still pleasant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So, what happens next?

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