All Comments on 'Myself'

Your story was great, but the lack of punctuation was very distracting, and your use of singular and plural upsetting. take a writing course and it will improve your stories. The imagination is there but the construction is not.

This could've been so hot if it were well written. Unfortunately, all the grammatical and punctuation errors distracted from the actual story. Please have an editor look at your work before you submit. And if English is not your native tongue, please write in your own language and have someone else translate.

One of the worst wastes of time ever published by Literotica!