by Jimbo545
Looking forward to what's next! :))) ideally, make it a bit slower of a burn than what you did with the sister... That just popped outta nowhere.
Wowzer! Lacking a little as to where his father was in the picture.
Like to see where this one goes!
Ok please dont stop now so many places you can go with this great story and you do know you can do more than one page anyway please keep up the good story.
Great story. Hope to see more fun with mom in chapter 3. Just a thought... Chapter 4 add in the sister and in chapter 5 both mom and the sister.
Great story so far perhaps still keeping his identity a secret to his mother for a little longer and build up the suspense yes incorporate the sister into the story is a good idea cannot wait for the next installment Lizzie💋💋