All Comments on 'Mystery at the Gloryhole Ch. 02'

by Jimbo545

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justme79925justme79925about 2 months ago

Keep Going! Great start

ctalonctalonabout 2 months ago

Chapter 3 please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Looking forward to what's next! :))) ideally, make it a bit slower of a burn than what you did with the sister... That just popped outta nowhere.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wowzer! Lacking a little as to where his father was in the picture.

Like to see where this one goes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

These are great, they're just too short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Ok please dont stop now so many places you can go with this great story and you do know you can do more than one page anyway please keep up the good story.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 months ago

Slut mom is not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I like the ending. I hope we get part 3 soon! 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Well done Jumbo.

ctalonctalonabout 1 month ago

Great story. Hope to see more fun with mom in chapter 3. Just a thought... Chapter 4 add in the sister and in chapter 5 both mom and the sister.

LizziepeeLizziepee27 days ago

Great story so far perhaps still keeping his identity a secret to his mother for a little longer and build up the suspense yes incorporate the sister into the story is a good idea cannot wait for the next installment Lizzie💋💋

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