- Loving Wives
- Mystery Fuck
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She nervously asked about bringing Bridget – her daughter – to live with us. "Of course," I beamed, smiling. "It will be good practice for when our two kids come along."
"You mean it?" she giggled, then leapt into my arms and started crying.
I went with Brittany to pick up five year old Bridget. Brittany's first husband must have had something going for him because Brittany was a well-adjusted, kind, well-mannered little girl. While I expected a long get-acquainted period, I was pleased that it only took about two months for us to adjust to each other. After that it was like Brittany and I had been married for decades (except for the intense, frequent, sex) and Bridget had been our child since birth. I formally adopted Bridget and she happily became a big sister for the first time when she was seven, and for the second time when she was nine. Our family is now complete.
Who would have thought that a mystery fuck would result in marital bliss? Maybe fairy tales do exist in real life once in a while.
- COMMENTS
nixrox10 months agoone additional thought - trying to use an electrical plate was a bit over the top - so if you are presented with a similar scenario - try just using the police to catch them in the middle of the break and enter. If they have guns, the purps will be going to prison for a long time anyway - especially if there are enough drugs laying around making it appear gang related to enhance the list of crimes.
nixrox10 months ago5 stars - I really like this story - especially the part about her daughter and them all living together happily ever after. It was a delightful change of pace from the usual slut/cuck crap in this category.
irinmikeover 1 year agoquick and snappy, and enjoyable. I liked it because it was positive even if a bit out there in fantasy land.
Overcriticalover 2 years agoAnd a fairy tale it was! But in Fantasyland what is more appropriate? 4*
dark2donut2almost 3 years agoOK, original plot, somewhat strange behavior of female character. I think her delinquent hubby could have been involved much earlier so she was putting "Kent" in a serious danger all the way, this should have been used in the plot and it would have made plot less "perfect" and more dangerous.
The part of plot trapping "Jackson" is totally absurd.
Electrified plate?
Be serious, what if they have non-conducting soles, how much voltage would you need to use to strike them? Or what would have happened if one of them convulsed to a heart attack or death?
You should have concocted something more realistic. Breaking and entering is a serious offence as it is and you would have evidence for that without a need for electric plate.
Emmeranover 4 years agoA little too much "Ex Dues Machina" but the concept was fun and it could be worked into an incredible novella.
It may be time to spread your wings and fly little author....
Good work.
Wyldcardalmost 6 years agoRe: Stalking
Yes, stalking is indeed real and dangerous. I didn't mean to minimize it. I was trying to state that within the context of the story, moving far across the country, switching to a new married name and having divorce and legal issues all moderated by a law firm is less baroque and more likely to be successful than the plot of this particular story with some shadily employed thug with limited financial resources to find the ex.
So perhaps there are even better story ways to get away from the situation and avoid stalking, that are less passive than just moving away, and less baroque and unlikely to succeed than very obvious and felonious, electrocution and drugging.
26thNCalmost 6 years agoAs ReedRichards said, every story on LW requires a suspension of belief. Every day realities of life don't make good movies, books, or LW stories. So everything falls into place for the good guy and his mystery lover, and we get a happy ending. That's not a bad thing.
amyyumalmost 6 years agohave never been stalked, or known someone who has been. Brittany had ever reason to worry that the thug would be desperate to find her and would do everything in his power to do so.
Wyldcardalmost 6 years ago"Besides, how probable is it that a stupid lout like her ex could have tracked her down?"
That was pretty much my view. They weren't living in opulence. Working for a shady company, doesn't mean being well paid. Most thugs tend not to be in fact, and the company isn't going to care if some random guy's wife left/divorced him.
Just move, pay a law firm to handle it all, avoid all direct contact, have her take new married name. Doubt he'd even know her social security #. Without money, not easy to find them.
Was an over baroque plot that made less sense than just leaving. But I do appreciate the free stories as always :)
ReedRichardsalmost 6 years agoStories onLW always require a suspension of disbelief, but this one took a lot. A shady company always has shady lawyers on hand, and electrocuted, drugged burglars are going to be tested; as soon as the toxicology report shows disabling drugs, the charges will be dropped.
The no questions asked affair screamed that she was married, and the first reference to bruises told us that it was to an abuser. If our hero had to use a PI to learn that, her isn’t as smart as he claimed to be.
It was a fun story, but it seemed as though you struggled to make the plot fit the ending. Since our hero had money, it would have been plot simpler to push a conviction for spousal abuse, along with a restraining order which would have been triggered if ex husband ever tried to track her down. That isn’t as secure as getting him locked up, but it’s a lot more believable.
Besides, how probable is it that a stupid lout like her ex could have tracked her down?
