All Comments on 'Myths and Legends - Amazons Ch. 01'

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NWRaptorNWRaptorover 1 year ago

A nice start. It will be interesting to see how this proceeds.

The "distressed hero, unexpectedly thrust into an unknown world, meets strange, potentially lethal, female inhabitants" plot seems familiar; I'm reminded of similar stories by Ripperfish - "Upon a Savage Shore" and "Storm World" and Bowoodstock's "Kita'thalla" series. All are multi-chapter tales (23, 9, and 17 respectively), loaded with intense character development and plot twists. Well worth the read, even though the last two remain unfinished, and perhaps abandoned. Please don't do that.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

NWR

Ghosted1974Ghosted1974over 1 year agoAuthor

Not planning on abandoning. The plan is for a book series starting with the Amazons and transitioning to other stories of legend throughout history. Thanks for the interest!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I have one gripe: A Ka-Bar is a knife, so how is shouldering it?

Ghosted1974Ghosted1974over 1 year agoAuthor

“Anonymousabout 14 hours ago

I have one gripe: A Ka-Bar is a knife, so how is shouldering it?”

I explained earlier in the story during or just after Jake’s fight with the first dino.

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I'm just a dirty old man. I’m currently actively writing four stories. I’m uploading in each story a chapter a week until I’ve caught up with where I am in progress. After that, I’ll just have to upload as I finish a chapter, which will take some time as I spend most of my da...