by Ghosted1974
There are lions, leopards, cheetahs, pythons and boa constrictors but no tigers, panthers nor anaconda in Africa.
It's like saying that there are elephants in Canada.
Apart from that, story is going well.
he know the situation is dire but keep wasting time...
story need more REAL plot, i skipped most if the sex part (try to ease on the "had sex 9ntimes and ejaculated a litre each time") and the three pages pretty much condense to half a page..
Great work. Life Happens. Don't worry about the time between chapters, you take care of your life first.
hope for another chapter soon as i have enjoyed this story... Hope it wont be too long