All Comments on 'N.Y.C. Vacation'

As soon as I learned it was about queers. Shouldn't be in Loving Wives.

Superb atmosphere and dreamy characters! Excellent depictions that make the blood flow!!! Absolutely Loved it!

NOTICED IN AUTHORS PROFILE THEIR SEX WAS NOT DISCLOSED. I CAN GUARANTEE TWO THINGS: THE AUTHOR IS A LESBIAN WOMAN AND SHE KNOWS NOTHING BOUT WRITING.

This story made me cum sooo hard. I am 47 married love my husband but would to be Lucy !!!!!!!

I read your story with ferver and didn't want Lusy and Bruce to go home. But alas, all good things must come to an end. Very erotic; almost to the point of intoxication.

I don't quite know how to explain I enjoyedthe story but hated it at the same time. First of all, they were two sweet dumb Hicks, Bruce and Lucy. They were lambs ready for slaughter in this big city.

A better approach would have been a more conservative narration, even clinical perhaps. This would have had the effect of accentuating not only the forbidden eroticism of the sex scenes but also the naughty sex-language of the characters.

The author seemed unable to distinguish between the sex crazed voice of the narration and the sex addled voices of the characters. Had the two voices stood out in relief, the tension and eroticism would have been greatly heightened - 2¢.

Nonetheless, despite the criticism, the unrestrained juiciness was quite erotic :))

First whore had only one breast, but I suppose a 42DD is sufficient. Nasty talking dwarf is a minus 4. Just a really tasteless, non erotic.piece of trash.

Juvenile crap.

Hahahahhahahaha....holy shit that was horrible.

But let me help you out

" Young wife is seduced and a gay husband is revealed."

You are so welcome.

Wow, I thought it was hot as fuck although I thought they would be sacrificed or devoured in some ancient black magic ritual. But I watched Paranormal Activity last night, so I had that floating around in my mind.