All Comments on 'Nadine'

A direct injection of sweetness to the bloodstream. Hot, beautiful and amazing. Five stars, Randi.

Praise: a very sweet love story of the type we all need to read now and then. Three lovely characters on a ride to happiness. Complaint (although not a serious one): the story seemed to finish a bit abruptly---I think you could have got a little more out of it. That said, an enjoyable five-star offering.

I've read almost all of the Invitational stories and this is the best one because the story led to a good ending. It flowed. 5*

very nice. liked the tension of the continuing seduction. D

And they lived happily ever after!

Except for the widowhood a very sweet story. As an author you have the ability to grab the reader and take them for a delightful ride. I am looking forward to more

I enjoyed that, a sweet love story with a, seemingly, happy ending. It is well written with relatable characters. It has defintiely brightened up my day. Thank you.

Another great story.

Hooked

Very sweet, if I had any complaint it would be the lack of any exploration of their relationship going forward, how her mother and Ginnie reacted. Still five stars.

Really nice exploration of the transition from broken-heartedness to friendship to love. The end was rather sudden but seems to offer hope and promise, things that have been missing from Nadine’s life since the accident. Very sweet story. 5*

Babe when it comes to lesbian Romance, you have it nailed.That was excellent. If anyone has criticized this they are idiots...5 Stars (SoundAbuse)

more like Fall by the Presets to me. nicely done

Finally read this well crafted piece and cannot imagine you not creating a follow up or more. So rich, even poignant moments between 3 main characters at the beginning of a love story. Come on, you can’t leave them/us hanging. Enjoy your creativity (but not happy if this is the end). ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Wonderful story. Would love to hear what's next, how the families react, how Wendy reacts. I enjoy how you tell a story. Thanks for sharing your talents and your time with us!

Sweet and a bit too short at the ending. I'll still give it a 5

Very touching and the analysis of all the characters is excellent.

Well written story, enjoyed reading it.

Nicely done

Great story. Once I got over how hot January was, I realized this was down under, not in the Pacific Northwest, where I'm from. Very nice buildup with a very nice outcome.

Fought sleep to finish…love the characters

The horror of an unannounced dead ….. getting around and being an adult is already hardcore but then having a six year old little doll, the shit hit the roof ….. and then yeah sometimes life throws you some lucky stars and the light appears again ….. lovely

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Gave you 5 Stars. Very sweet story and I could tell Ray hasn’t been around small children a lot. Tubs are slippery and small children do bounce.

Take care.