by Sylviafan
You really do write very well. This variation of a May-to-September love story left me with a very damp patch in my bed! (I read it very early one morning!) It gets 5 stars from me, even though I'd be happy to learn why Adam and Nadia spent some time "writing" on the bed! Only kidding - I'm often found "writing" myself, albeit with an audience. My cuckold does enjoy watching me get fucked!
This is one of your best stories to date, my friend. I felt emotionally engaged throughout; totally identified with Adam. It's not often we see true romance represented here, but this was a tingling story.
Funnily enough, I recently met an Indian lady in her 50s... grey hair and an unfathomable figure under her winter dog-walking clothing. And attractive in a way I struggled to reason with... As you can imagine, what you wrote, resonated with me.
5*, obviously!
This was great! You made me really feel the "hit over the head with something" sensation of sudden, unexpected attraction. Adam not wanting to seem too forward and Nadia's self worth issues come across very realistic. The sex wasn't as intense as some of your other stories, but that's not a bad thing; cozy lovemaking is lots of fun too. Nice little story!
I just want to say, thank you, for fear of saying anything further and spoiling it.