All Comments on 'Naked: How to Dress the Truth Ch. 01'

by ISKwest

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WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 9 years ago
Two stars says it for me

The story was well written, just didn't care for the subject matter. I didn't find anything erotic about the story.

queenslandchrisqueenslandchrisalmost 9 years ago
Loved it..5 stars

A great story about the emotional roller coaster that come after a threesome. Well written, showing the two interpretations of both loving partners crossing the boundary of fantasy to reality. There is a saying that 'a man opens his legs to have sex while a woman opens her heart and makes love. I think your story touches on this. Looking forward to the nest 3 chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Looking forward to more

Well done, entirely believable and real. It took a while to figure out just what had happened. Very good sex scene, too.

AspernEsslingAspernEsslingover 8 years ago
Original

Original and unusual. I have no idea where you're headed, but I'm along for the ride.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well done. You captured something and stayed with it.

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