by Zeenutt
the mother was a whore and she tease her son for no reason.the writer went to long with the teasing of the son.it got stupid at one point.
...anyway! The writing was flat out atrocious. The plot was beyond stupid. The dialogue couldn't have been much worse. The son was nearly retarded and the mom was borderline insane.<p>
I had fun reading it anyway. I liked it. God help me.
don't care what anyone else thinks. If this is your genre like it is mine this story series was amazing. She teased him every which way imaginable. Best story series I have read in a long long time. Zeenutt, thanks.
... and yet I loved it. Right from chapter 1, the dialogue was laughable, the situations were crazy (even for THIS website), but it worked. Very hot!
The story went off the rails in previous chapters by having her fuck her son's friends and the photographer (again, what the fuck was that about?), so I was glad to see that even though this chapter had her fucking other guys, it was very brief and summarized. As soon as I saw that this was 4 pages, I knew that it was going to be the last chapter and sum everything up, and it did not disappoint.
The only reason that it doesn't get a 100 is that the husband, who we never (?) see until this chapter, is not only ok talking with his son about his wife's body, and encouraging his wife to show her body to the son, but he is ok with them fucking and joins in??? Even with the unbelievability of everything else, I found this just too much to swallow (if it was possible, I'd give you a 90).
Start a new story soon!
a must read for anyone into mom and son incest. could not stop masterbating to this story. if you like your fantasy mom as an wanton exhibitionist, nude model, hooker, and porn star, then read this story.
So much wanton sex, every paragraph, sex, sex, sex. It was wonderful! It hit the exhibionist button in me, and the son/mom incest buton, and any other stray buttons I may have. I could almost feel like the Mom felt as she got naked for her son to tempt him. Great fun!
loved every fucking line. Love all the language Love to hear (read?) all the fucks and fuckers. Mom using filthy language to her son and son calling mom a fucking son fucker. I've cum to every chapter. Pity she didn't go for a gang bang with her sons friends and let Andy fuck her in front of his friends.
Rushed it and the mum was just crazy...
Far too much and the writing was pretty shambolic.
Good story but felt very rushed towards the end and the writing was very repetative at times.
all dear anony wants is it stroke off and cum all over himself. I gave you a 5
But count me out. It's childish. I skipped chapters 3-9 to leave this comment.
I think I wasted the same amount of time before, not sure and I don't remember if I commented. A bunch to teasing crap. What goofy crap, she is a slut. Nothing wrong with being a slut but teasing your son and fooling him by fucking other men and then denying it: what is the purpose?
I will not be trapped into reading this again. Ever.
It took ten chapters, but Andy finally got inside his mom's cunt. It got to the point that Andy's mom became so infatuated with him that she called out,"Fuck me Andy!" no matter who's dick was fucking her. It didn't matter if Greg's dick was hairy as she bobbed on his peter. In the end Andy was disappointed. He'd imagined fucking his mom nearly 10,000 times over the years, and her pussy was a lot tighter in his fantasies.
This was the most idiotic pile of disjointed drivel. Andy seems positively retarded, as does the writer, and myself for slogging through it all. It must have been written by someone from India or Nigeria. The same ones who tell us we won something if we would only send them money. Actually, their writing is better than this.
Your story was so hot! I enjoyed it so much I could not keep my hands off of my hard cock! Keep writing!
I don't know where to start. It began ok, but by chapter 4 it had morphed into foolishness. And then drag that foolishness for 6 more chapters! WHY??
some unlogical events don't matter. Made me so wet a very good chain story, mother and son in another Scenario as usual
The worst story ever. First 4 or 5 parts average but rest is rubbish. Waste of the time!
He was 22 but they talk to each other like he was 11. Good grief. Pathetic
Yes! My own mother, Gladys Alene, was the sexiest cunt in Overland, Missouri in the 60s...mom fucked a few of my high school friends....what a fucking whore.