All Comments on 'Naked Planet Ch. 01'

Your a talented writer writing excellent fetishes. Not much more to say really. Love to see more of this!

Nice start. Gwen is hot. Cant wait to see what troubles she will be coning across in the next chapters.

Yep, you are definitely talented and, as a (female) sci-fi fan, I'm enjoying the actual story as much as the sexual aspect of it. I hope there is more forced humiliation of our fine heroine cause that's hot. Keep her off balance and reacting, not too purposefully slutty, if you know what I mean lol. Txs!

Thanks for the positive feedback!

I'm glad you're enjoying it; I tried to write the kind of fiction I've always wanted to read, if that makes any sense. And I know what you mean about our heroine--I love telling the explicit, non-consensual aspects of her story, but I try to balance it out by portraying her as smart and likable. I just think the sex and humiliation is so much hotter when it's happening to a strong and interesting woman.

Anyway, bear with me as I grind through the upcoming chapters; I'm always trying to improve my writing, so feel free to offer any other feedback or suggestions you think might make the reading experience better!

Another female Sci-Fi fan here. I'm L-O-V-I-N-G this first chapter. Looking forward to starting the second. I love the details and the descriptiveness of this, and the pacing of the story is excellent. The degradation scene was amazing! Easiest five starts I've given a story in a long time.

Thanks! I'm a little surprised (at least two) female readers are enjoying this--I'm a guy indulging his sci-fi porn fantasies--but I'm glad you like it.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

What an awesome Story!

love it, hope there will be soon more!