by cowboy109
Wow...just...no. it's confusing, disjointed, oddly lacking in details in every way that matters...characters make no sense...just...no.
this story makes no sence. i tried to get into it and give it a chance but no. i just do not care for this story.. but take heart and try again...trs
That's some serious fucked up reaction to rape. But damn! Way to get some retribution for one thing out of the other fucked up things in her life. I will treasure how I image his face when she tells him he wasn't tasting pussy juice!
Gave it 5 stars because I hate homophobes!
So, intro paragraph was strange, kind of far too esoteric to make any sense. It wasn't until she left her office and got into the elevator that the story began to flow. And the title? WTF?
Pretty good, deep in the mind of someone driven by low worth pushed on them from the start of life. The real reason belief and rage at a god spike in times of suffering.