All Comments on 'Naked Poop'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
WTF

Dude wtf is this story? Like Jessica Christ.

MacD7MacD7almost 8 years ago

Wow...just...no. it's confusing, disjointed, oddly lacking in details in every way that matters...characters make no sense...just...no.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
no

this story makes no sence. i tried to get into it and give it a chance but no. i just do not care for this story.. but take heart and try again...trs

LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 8 years ago
Ha! Loved the ending!

That's some serious fucked up reaction to rape. But damn! Way to get some retribution for one thing out of the other fucked up things in her life. I will treasure how I image his face when she tells him he wasn't tasting pussy juice!

Gave it 5 stars because I hate homophobes!

So, intro paragraph was strange, kind of far too esoteric to make any sense. It wasn't until she left her office and got into the elevator that the story began to flow. And the title? WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
i could follow

Pretty good, deep in the mind of someone driven by low worth pushed on them from the start of life. The real reason belief and rage at a god spike in times of suffering.

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89over 2 years ago

...I checked the tags. Homophobia is a fetish now?

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