All Comments on 'Naked Portraits Pt. 13'

Dude ,,, or babe? I love this series. You've been teasing us with the Li Hong encounters. I thought that Li was going to be Gwen's first girl-girl thing. Then bam! It's her and Aly. Cool. I'm the dude that asked about Meka Okuda. I'm still waiting for someone to get it on with her. I'm betting that something happens with Matt.

Hi,

I copy these to read in entirety off my reader and as I went from the part one, skipping to over the two year hiatus, found I was jumping from chapter four to chap 12. Is this an error on my part?

Nice story,

jet

The mistake is all me but the story is complete. With all the rewrites, I sometimes lose track of my chapter numbers. The long break from part one to part two didn't help either. I'd blame my editor Boston but he's bigger than me ... and he usually pays for the beer.

Glad you like the story.

Thanks.

Breakthrough