by floaturboat
Keep writing, I really enjoyed this story. I Love stories about older mature mom's and son with spankings during sex as well. It is a real turn on.
Gday from australia
brilliant story
sorry for not contacting you direct
i am on a mobile phone
wish i was in russ's shoes
^5s man you have to continue this
Really enjoyed the story! Would love to read more about this family, but the story stands well on it's own as is. Thanks!
I'm not a literary major so I won't bore everyone with a critique on what was misspelled or what words were used incorrectly. I'm not doing this because unlike the other wankers I did not see any errors. Keep up the good work. Perhaps you can include the sister. I'd like Russ to spank the sister as well. Ideally I would like Russ to spank both his mother and sister while they are kissing each other. Yeahhh!
I thought the content and interaction between characters was really good but, sometimes the misspelling and grammatical errors were distracting. Overall though, I liked the story very much. Please continue to write for this wonderful site, maybe just use one of the volunteer editors next time. ;)
In real life is not usually hot but some of the best stories on Lit are in this section and this is one, Thanks.
I really enjoyed reading your story, and hope that you will continue with more chapters of this good relationship between a son and his mother. thanks for sharing your work with us....Rich