by atkins
Please keep writing on this one. It has so many more layers left in it to explore
Passion, desire, sensuality, longing...I could go on. Truly amazing. I am a grammar and spell-check freak. I did not notice any as I was rapt in the story. Being in the arms of an older woman is nearly indescribable, having been with a few myself - 15 to 25 years my senior. You did a wonderful job. The one thing I wonder is...what happened next with these two? 50 Stars if I could vote that many.
Again, you have written a fantasy I long dreamed about. While I have never been able to experience all of nana and dickies adventure, I have lived them out with several older women.
bring it on, atkins..bring it on!!!!