by Imstillfun
The real question is, "Where is this story going?"
Is there a part 2, or is it stand alone?
I liked it enough to give it a "5," bot only a "4" because you left the doubt.
A very nice story with many possibilities ! Its now time that Bobby and his sister-in-law get together as start to settle in and they now should be screwing a lot after the divorce if official. Dennis should just go away with or without Janey....... Many opportunities exist for Bobby to be taught how to be a great lover etc. Arousing and thanks.
I'm not surprised that Dennis' mom wanted Nancy to try to work it out but I guess Nancy's mom liked Janey better than Nancy because Janey's betrayal of her sister was really unforgivable. I'm not surprised that both dad's were on Nancy's side because they obviously had some moral fiber and Dennis did not live up to their personal standards. As for Dennis, they had no kids, why not just divorce and see Janey out in the open. Maybe he knew that his dad would fire him for being such an asshole but at least he would have been honest. It's no sin to get divorced - I should know. Oddly enough, my ex-wife's dad also sided with me but that's a different story.
I wish Nancy and Bobby nothing but the best-est of the best. Thank you for this brilliant story :)
WOW! You sure do make interesting twists in your stories. Yes, I could see it coming a mile away, BUT ---to see in print what my mind was thinking was super. Thanks.
Rotten ending with no resolution at all. This had the potential to be a 5 star story but dropped to a 1
because you couldn’t take the time to finish it. What a disappointment.
Bill S.
I gave it a 5 even though you ended it to fast. There was room for at least one more chapter.
First let me state this. You are my favorite author. That being said, this one ended pretty quick and almost felt like you didnt want to finish the story. It had huge potential. But anyway, if you decide on a part 2, we'll all welcome it. Keep up the great work