All Comments on 'Nando and Will Ch. 03'

this was another great work. thankyou

Wonderful as always. Hope to see more of this story very soon. Keep up the great work.

love your story, please con't to write. can't wait for the next part.

WHAT CAN I SAY?? BRILLIANT! You've got an amazing talent, I read through all your stories non stop. Please continue writing, it'd be a crime for you not to. Great sexual tension,it's so beautifully and well written. You should be published. Please continue to publish stories on Lit. Great job once again.

I love all of your stories they're brilliant but I have to say I was waiting for the marshall to sweep uncle Bart off his feet! Still amazing though.

Wow, I love the way you develop the story line with surprising twists and turns. The characters invoke a reality that drives passion and pleasure throughout. The description of physical intimacy creates arousing mental images. My only complaint, you had Will let Nando off WAY too easily. And remember, even gay guys don't "share their feelings" that quickly and openly. :)

I love being surprised with the turn of events with the Marshall. I can't wait to continue the story.

Wow, I love the way you develop the story line with surprising twists and turns. The characters invoke a reality that drives passion and pleasure throughout. The description of physical intimacy creates arousing mental images. My only complaint, you had Will let Nando off WAY too easily. And remember, even gay guys don't "share their feelings" that quickly and openly. :)

I love being surprised with the turn of events with the Marshall. I can't wait to continue the story.

If he can't see someone like Marina? How ill he look after Will??!

If nando is blind to all this even after knowing she was his ex, then he’s not the right person to will

So nando is forgiven that easily? Clearly he hurt will very much and a sorry and a night sex fixed all that? Can’t he see what mariannas intentions were? I mean he could hug, be chummy and cozy with her but he’s angry with will for nothing?? I can see some unresolved matters here…