by JCMcNeilly
It is nice to know that Connie came around to Sarah’s way of thinking. With Sarah’s father passing, you would think it would be downhill all the way. Thankfully it was the spark that set everything in motion. Even Sarah’s mom found happiness in the union.
I found your reference to Ocean Breeze Soap. (Had to Google it). Watched the YouTube even. Not going to spoil it. Your readers can look it up themselves. Still no bonus points, darn.
This is an excellent story with lot of self-discovery, romance, humor and love. Can’t do much better than that.
What a lovely story so far…beautiful characters… looking forward to the next part…though the title worries me a lot…
Thank you
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When you can make a straight old fart tear up, you have to know you have written a fantastic story. Looking forward to the rest of the story!!
Recently have reread some of my favorite stories on this site. I have many favorite romance stories. But this is still my all time favorite. Thank you!
great storey, well written and very relatable. loved it especially at this time of year.
Great story, well told. I loved the gradual build up revealing more about the characters. Thank you for sharing it.
I can't believe how this made me feel. Your talent for writing is nothing short of amazing. I can't wait to read the rest.
I absolutely love it. Perfect story! So curious for the continuation.
Coming fresh from some of your other stories, I'm blown away by how every one manages to bring something new and refreshing. You have an astounding knack for writing lovable characters.
I feel the same; 5 stars are not enough. What a beautifully written story. I think I know what Heidi's wish was. I'm looking forward to finding out if I got it right. Would that real life could be so fantastic.
Yes!! As all your sequels this one too deserves at least 10 points… world class writing! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Apologizing ahead of time for the TMI, but I usually come to this site to take care of "personal needs." This story was so lovely & beautiful I quickly lost focus on that & became enraptured in the story! Reading your story gave me the same cozy feeling I get from snuggling on the couch in December & watching a Hallmark holiday movie. You're an incredibly talented & skillful storyteller!
Lovely heart warming story of developing love..
So anxious to read the following developments.
Thanks for this
Great romantic story. Lovely characters.
funny i never thanked you 😊 its not the first time iv read this you have had some great comments so be happy well and safe a fan shayne
This is from page 3. As I lied in bed thirty minutes later, alone with my thoughts, I desperately tried to work some things out with myself.
(LIED is past tense for LIE a verb, I think what you are looking for is laid or lain in bed)
I am reading this 2nd time around, it's 22nd December and I am going to spend 1st Christmas ever without my nearest and dearest close to me. Even if that's by choice, this part of the story is touching me to the core.
Thank you,
Such a lovely story I found myself crying along with Connie as she was hanging the Christmas decorations.
I love all your stories. They have the perfect balance of romance and eroticism. And usually they are flawless. But in the first part of Nanny Sarah you said that Sara’s sister was named Rachel and in the following parts her name is Rebecca.
Just a comment.
Loved all the story!
This was the first of your stories I discovered 4 years ago. It remains my favorite. I hope you will write again for us sometime soon.