All Comments on 'Naomi's Pride'

I am glad you used the Mature category so that the ending was a surprise. Thanks

I liked the ending, since the first 75% was completely unbelievable. It made the story nicely sentimental.

I really enjoyed the story. Surprise ending was goodE

Loved it all. especially the twist ending

Did not to much like the ending, but i liked the story. Thanks for sharing.

Knots per hour ,is weird for even US "English"

Ten minutes after you pull a cold, wet woman out of the water, and she lets you shag her. Not! She would be freezing her ass off. A gent would get her into really warm clothes, maybe let her sleep for a few hours till the adrenaline was burned up, or at least get her a hot chocolate and listen to the tale. Save the sex for the next day . . .

Knots per hour. Clear giveaway that you aren't a boater.

Thanks for your comment. If you read to the end you will see why she shagged him a few hours out of the water. There is a reason. I grant you, the knots per hour was incorrect, I am not a lifetime boater. You were not the first to mention it either. I do appreciate your comment though.

This is a work of fiction, so the details of the boating speed and stuff didn't matter to me, but the story is the stuff that keeps young men going to the sea! I didn't even mind the other-worldly twists at the end of the story. Nicely done, keep it up, Girochen!