All Comments on 'Naomi's Story'

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xPoisonx almost 15 years agoAuthor

Hey :)

Pleaae vote, comment and come back for more :D

Scotsman69 almost 15 years ago

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Ronnie 1946 almost 15 years ago

Where's The Nude Day Theme?

Don't get me wrong, I thought it was a very horny story BUT I thought entries in this competition had to be based around a nude theme, I didn't see that here. For that reason I've only given it 75%, under any other circumstances I'd have given you 100% it was a well written story.

I've put my name to this critique, one thing I personally hate is criticism from people who are too gutless to sign it and remain anonymous.