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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sexy, funny, want more with these characters!

Sexy, funny, want more with these characters!

Continue on with these two - maybe they'll trip together to Italy and find more lovers, maybe they'll find a strap on irresistible! Maybe Lucia finds a man for Ginny and a 3some develops. Describe Lucia's breasts - let the readers "see"! Does she sport a hairy Italian bikini area - do tell! What did she think of Ginny's bar bottomed thong and pinched, popped breasts? Did Ginny explore Lucia's butt as Ginny enjoyed Lucia's butt stimulation -- Tell us! These characters have more life to enjoy - let us readers in! Oh, and edit and proof better, misused words like week/weak can be corrected! Loved it! J

ExescortExescortover 6 years ago
I loved this..

...from the moment I realised “the grass half full” was intentional.

Hot

Horny

Wonderfully funny 💖💖💖💖💖

MaonaighMaonaighover 6 years ago
What's in a word?

You don't need a thesaurus when your day ends as well as this (thesaurus: a large, word-spouting reptile).

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

Cute, sexy and witty.

Bridget69Bridget69over 6 years ago
It's the universal language...

no matter how you pronounce it. I cracked up at the hairy fajita part. Original play on words.

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