All Comments on 'Naples'

Great Story, well written!!

Great story, your writing made me feel every sensation that Ben and Todd were feeling. Thanks for sharing with us!

wow great story I was so involved in it I loved it. The only probelm with it is that it ended. I hope you write more stories and another chapter about these to because it was great.

Hot, sweet seduction story, as the young man discovers his gay side in a comfortable environment that allows him the confidence to explore and be a bit daring. He was definitely as seductive as the older man was.

I'll really be looking forward to a sequel, where perhaps more physical explorations of these gay feelings will occur. It could go either as a great summer memory or as a long-term relationship.

You did a great job with the emotions of both men, and set the scene beautifully.

I'm sitting here with my pants and underwear at my ankles, extremely hard and wanting more! What happened next?

bluesable@aol.com

It is a great story that made my cock hard and played with it with anticipation. I could picture myself in the story. The story took my breath away. Job well done

Well-written, very realistic and really HOT. I'm dying for more! Please continue this story or submit others. You're very talented.

Very sensual story! Loved the respect each man had for the other and the focus on speedos (and the jockstrap at the end.) I could (and did!) visualize the story very nicely. Came on several different occasions. Thank you

I found this story very exciting, hot and sensual.. Very well carried out.. Beautifully written...

Matt

such a hot story, i'm 18 and bi-curious, oh my goodness this was good. please make more.

This is an excellent SEXY story of a young man's seduction. The opening and gradual character development are handled very nicely, with style and gentleness. But Ben's wondrous charm becomes in the end the selfish taking of a sweet, virginal young ass as a trophy for his own pleasure. I do not like the ending of the tale (tail?).

You did a good job with this story but I have to agree with taxpapabob.

The ending does not quite fit!

Ben is a gentle person but suddenly he pushes Todd down and

takes him without preparation?

Change the ending a little and it'll be perfect! ^^

Agree that the ending fuck was too abrupt a change from all the gentle earlier interactions. Loved the descriptions of when their cocks touched. Please write a sequel.

I can't say enough about the execution of this piece. Extremely well written and engaging. Very inspirational.

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND BEAUTIFUL THAT IF A PERSON HAS ANY DOUBTS ABOUT HIS SEXUALITY ..... THIS WILL MAKE HIM SEE HOW WONDERFUL IT CAN BE

I wish it was me with Ben

The story was incredible ... I wish I had an experience like this!

Damn. That story was awesome!!

Anyone wanna chat with a hot guy? 2516436241 text me!!

Want everyone to read about Ben and Todd. Near perfection of what seduction stories strive to accomplish. I was astounded by the quality of the writing, the clever situations, and sublime believable, lovable characters.

Well written, spine-tingling build up, perfect experience!

Reminded me of being seduced by an older man on the beach at Vero. One of the most sublime times of my young life...totally unexpected!

we are still waiting for the follow up for this story....its a favourite, please write part 2 xx

Wow, I just read all the way through this sensual, hot story. I hope it was true, my own cock got so hard just reading it. And well written too, you sir have a definite talent for writing. I'd love to see Todd reciprocate in future chapters.

cant wait for part two

Excellent, made my mouth water

Super hot and tastefully done. I liked that Ben was sexy and flirty but not too sleazy or forceful. And Todd didnt get gay panic. Would enjoy more of this. Thanks.

Good story, but I can't believe Ben didn't use any kind of lubricant. It must have hurt like mad!.