All Comments on 'Natalie'

Someone who knows that the outside is not the vagina and uses the proper names for this area. BRAVO, well done...AND I liked the story. Please continue

Thanks for writing this story! Emotion and erotic feeling together! Thanks!

I can't tell you how many virgin stories are ruined for me by the hymen being somewhere down inside the vagina. Otherwise, well done.

That was a wonderful, hot, sexy story! Please, keep writing and sharing!

Nicely done! I look forward to more of your writing.

Enjoyed this very much. Keep writing, I can't wait for more.

Spoiled by the crap about the pill he should have just pushed is cock in as far as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

5 stars!

Still had a hymen after experimenting with vegetables?

Good story, very hot! One thing to watch for in your next story is proper use of dialogue - when a new person is talking, start a new paragraph. You can't have two people speak in the same paragraph.

Otherwise very well done. Keep up the sexy writing!

Enjoyed it

They hadn't done it before, so they had to try it. Like Lay's Potato Chips--they couldn't have just one. :)

Now that they've tried it, they're hooked. Looking forward to your next story--or a continuation of this one.

I had a similar experience back in 1983, I was even the captain of my school’s swim team. The young woman became my wife and we’re still married today. Just reading this and the memories it aroused brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you

LOVED IT but I think you pushed it into to short of story. It could have taken a few more pages to get there or maybe even 5 or six. A good fast read but it was to fast moving. Keep going as It is a good beginning.

Looking forward to chapter 2